Every Other Weekend

By: Jaxson Kidman

Narrated by: Alexander Cendese, Lauren Sweet

It was only meant to be every other weekend. But now I need him every night. As a single mom, a relationship was out of the question. So, we had an arrangement.

The first rule: every other weekend. But that wasn't enough.

The second rule: he can't meet my son. But he did, and they got along.

The third rule: I won't fall in love. But I couldn't help it.

The final rule: I'll never let anyone else break my heart.

And now that rule is about to be broken, too.

©2019 Jaxson Kidman (P)2019 Tantor

Written Fine, story very typical

The story lacked much imagination but it was well written... especially the intimate scenes. I’m not overly impressed.

3.5 typical story

It kinda hit home with the every other weekend life that part hit home. Jordyn making excuses for Keith just because he’s her son dad is crazy to me. Ramsey and his half story dragged on like spit it out . It was an easy quick story I enjoyed.

Too much he said she said - literally

Story: Generally good but the dialogue was so distracting it made it hard to finish. In conversations, the author wrote I said, he said, she said after all lines of dialogue. There wasn't a need for that. If you are writing and they're all in a group, you don't need to say he said after every single thing. It is implied, especially in audio due to different voices. Narration: The "said" after all lines of dialogue led to a monotone listen. The male narrator was much better than the female narrator. I think that the female narrator did not do the voices as well as the male narrator. Better writing would have led to better voices.

He said she said etc…

Mom exaggerates everything… Boring story… And the she said, he said in the narration it’s repitive all throughout the whole story it gets on your nerves…