Elemental Empire

Elemental Empire, Book 1

By: Peter North

Narrated by: Melanie Hastings, Gabriel Michael

Length: 9 hrs and 49 mins

Publisher's summary

Home-sweet-home? Not at Pine Ridge trailer park…

My name is Logan Greenwood, and I’d rather be anywhere else.

When I decided to come home to help my mom out of a rough spot, I had no idea how bad it would be.

But when a freak storm kicks up and I literally get sucked into another world, family drama is the least of my worries. I couldn’t get home if I wanted to.

And in this world–full of drop-dead gorgeous elves, nymphs, and dryads–the last thing on my mind is going home.

Only problem is, this perfect world is on the brink of war. As Drakkus, Lord of Chaos, and his minions descend upon my newfound paradise, one thing becomes clear: somebody has to stop this guy, and that somebody is me.

This is fiction with the male audience in mind. That means you'll get heroic battles between good and evil, lots of beautiful and powerful women, and a badass MC who slays on the battlefield and between the sheets.

©2022 Peter North (P)2022 Podium Audio

Man screams?

There are some inconsistencies were the writer seems to use phrases that don’t match the situation which jumble the main character’s personality from sharp eyed to unaware of his surroundings in the same paragraph. The description said there was "a badass MC who slays on the battlefield and between the sheets." So far I'm only hearing an MC who panics and squeals.

The male narrator accentuates the writing a bit over dramatically for me and unfortunately he narrates the vast majority of the book. The female narrator is solid.

decent

I thought the story was good few annoying things like crungy sex scenes and mc denying who he is because he is Logan Greenwall not Logan grennwyl. really. he overly respects women but when they do the deed he punishes them like hated sex slaves. tweak a few things and get the 5th star. just my opinion. it was worth reading and my credit.

Read this book

This story is amazing. And the performance by Melanie and Gabriel are superb. Absolutely worth reading.

a movie in my mind

I like the whole story line. the narrator's are very good. starting book 2.

Great story

Great performance good story mc is a total ass to his women just started 2nd book and he’s more of a ass so gonna be done after book 2

Ehhhh it’s ok

The performance was good.

The story doesn’t tie the characters together as well as it could. Seems rushed.. in relationships and the story. More of a teenage smut book. If your into that thing this is your book. Has great potential but fell short for me.

A great beginning to my next series

I liked the characters and how they were written. How the MC had to come to terms with his new world and himself was good and I am looking forward to the rest of the series

Great Book

If you enjoy books with a good storyline and plenty of explicit content, give this series a try I'm glad I did.

Stupid

The story moves so so so so so slow. Didn’t even make it half way through.

Basic

Really only thing I literally like is the VA’s other than that I really don’t think this book is worth reviewing but I guess I’ll try to explain why.

First off the MC is unlikable he’s just crude and oversexed. He can’t think without blood rushing south is for all purposes a “idiot”.,. The hope of a world on his shoulders should just burn if he’s it’s last hope.

The people of said world are weird in an odd BDSM role play way where they mock and debase the mc but still sleep or try to sleep with him… so yeah not into those kinks at all sorry.

The female characters are just as forgettable as the last time you wiped your shoes before entering your house … you just do it without thought or attention. They are just there and it’s like bleh.

All in all if I was in that world I’d side with the villain and burn it down cause it’s just sooo annoying to have to prove yourself to everyone or be giga chad to get attention from ppl who I literally won’t care what happen to them.

All in all no I will not be doing any more reviews on this author or book if this is the level of good writing I can expect