Baleful Betrayal

Overworld Chronicles, Book 12

De: John Corwin

Narrado por: Austin Rising

Payback is hell.

After the crystoid incident nearly destroyed all magic in Eden and killed a dear friend, Justin Slade wants payback. That means invading the angel realm Seraphina and squashing the usurper Cephus like a bug.

Unfortunately, another crystoid in Seraphina is preventing the Alabaster Arch from opening a portal into the realm. Using a sky portal from the last remaining crystoid in Eden, Justin launches a desperate bid to open the portal from the other side.

Cephus, however, is more than ready for a counterattack. Not only has he fortified his fortress, but he's built a new arch and plans to open a portal to the Void, releasing the Beast and Armageddon.

Enlisting the help of the Seraphim sky fishers and their fleet of flying ships, Justin has to repair the Alabaster Arch leading back to Eden and bring through the mightiest supernatural army Seraphina has ever known.

©2016, 2017 John Corwin (P)2018 John Corwin

the ending is yust ruing the story!!

story was ok buiten wy that's ending is bad
dont now i Will Read the next

Another fantastic book in this series!💜

They are back trying to save the world, again. An unlikely group of “loyal to the end” friends are together again. This series is highly entertaining and full of fun, mystery and adventure. The narration is outstanding!! This is book 12 and continues on. I highly recommend this book/series!

Sisters Spotlight 💜

Another Masterpiece in this Series

Just gets better and better. The characters continue to develop in amazing ways and the story line does too!! Never a full moment.

Each book is becoming a repeat or rehashing of same

The main character isn’t showing any growth or maturity. The stories are becoming a rehashing of the one prior. Too much diff, not enough action. The story feel stale now. I would like the main characters to show growth, I found myself skipping small sections to avoid the juvenile antics of the story. There is no evidence of maturity or growth

Corwin's outright inability to write fiction!

Corwin is a bad, truly horrible writer!! His stories would be good if he only knew how to create a character that is plausible in our living reality, he might one day become worthy of the title "Author". His MC, Justin Slade, is a COWARD,a fool, willfully ignorant, morally weak and pathetic!! He is afraid to kill his enemies. In allowing his enemies to live to soothe his soul and makes his life easier by living with regret. However, his come back to kill even more innocent people by the thousands and ten of thousands!! He puts his own team in harms way and in suicide actions just to keep from having to kill an enemy. If one of my Marines in my squad had acted like corwin's coward, I would have personally sent a round through his dome the instant he failed his part of our mission and cost us a brother. He would not be allowed the chance to kill another Marine!
Corwin thinks our US Military is somehow stuck in 1775. You know, where they get online or in 3 row formation and fire on command at the enemy standing still in front of us. It's so disgusting and embarrassing to real warriors that has spilled blood with small unit tactics, and having NCOs leading fire teams and squads in a moving firefights, door to door clearing of Ramadi.
his scenes of soldiers and in story firefights and how he writes out combat scenes with tactics not used by any nation in past 100 years. it proves his laziness in not studying the subjects he writes about and his ignorance of modern warfare and the amazing warriors and infantrymen we have fighting them. he writes like an entitled teenager after a frontal lobotomy! seriously, this series is criminal. corwin is stealing consumers money from his readers and listeners of this series!
Corwin should go back to modeling, because he is a complete FAILURE AT WRITING FICTION!! Oh, yeah, he can't write out a conversation containing multiple characters without using the "He said", "she said", "Josh said" etc... after every single character speaks their line to the other characters taking part in the convo! it is not what professional writers use to denote and differentiate between the characters. it shows weak mental abilities of those attempting to smith words!! Highschool students are better writers than corwin!