The Last Marine, Book Two

A Dystopian War Novel

De: T.S. Ransdell

Narrado por: T.S. Ransdell

Duración: 12 h y 24 m

Resumen del Editor

One country. Two cultures. A house divided....

In a future where American culture has been thoroughly demonized, US Marine Sean Harris returns to the United States from the Sino-American War. Only he finds his country, his government, no longer has a place for him, nor the United States Marine Corps.

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great story

the story was great. the editing needs some work. it went a little rainman at times.

the accuracy of the brotherhood of the Marine corps and what we stand for.

in the beginning of the first book I almost stopped reading becuz it was dragging on. I'm really glad I kept reading. these two books really brought back emotional memories of my time in the Marine Corps. I don't know if the other served or not,but he was very accurate in displaying the brotherhood and camaraderie of the Marine Corps. sadly,these two books portray a very possible future for America. I really hope we can come together as a nation and remember who we are,and what we represent!! Semper Fi!

Semper Fi Ii

Thank God for The Marine Corps. I really enjoyed the series and look forward more works from the author. It is a scary look at what could be in our countries future!

Great book

It was a great listen except for some editing errors where they repeated and left in the previously read paragraph.

Nice

Loved the book but it does have some editing issues in part two. Cant wait for book three to come to audible!

Difficult to follow

References were good, but editing left a lot to be desired. More times than I wanted to count, the script was repeated. The editor just didn't remove the various readings presented. This made for a vary distracting story, also there wasn't a smooth transition from one character to another, leaving you confused who was the subject of the scene.

Editing errors

Numerous repeats in the 2nd book. Great story, hits very close to current gubmint reality and mentality.

must have been self edited

meh. take an acting class and hire an editor. numerous errors. don't know what else.

Bad editing

After listening to the first book, I wanted to finish the story. There were multiple times that the narrator repeated what he just read, and I me MULTIPLE times. There was even a time where he clearly screwed up and apologized and re-read what he screwed up. None of it edited out. Very distracting and hard to follow.

Good Story, Terribly Read for Audible

This book was a terrible performance, worse even than book 1 with its abnormally long pauses between paragraphs and chapters. Anytime a line is read two or three times to get the right tone, one of them should be edited out. It would also be good to edit out sneezes and added talking. I guess there were so many complaints about long pauses that the reader decided to not take a breath between paragraphs. It sounded like an elementary student reading a run on sentence. With all that being said, I like the overall story line. Probably should have been three books so that the trial could be talked about but overall it was good.