The Dark Descent

A Short Story

De: Adam McKim

Narrado por: Daniel Hord

The Dark Descent tells the story of David and Rachel, two adventurous cave divers drawn to a mysterious underwater cave system off the coast of California. But as they plunge deeper into the uncharted depths, the line between discovery and danger begins to blur, pushing their survival to the limit. With dwindling resources and no clear way back, David and Rachel must rely on their training, resilience, and unshakable bond to escape before time runs out. The Dark Descent is a harrowing journey of endurance and love beneath the surface. Will they find their way out, or be lost to the depths forever?

©2025 Adam McKim (P)2025 Adam McKim

4.5 ⭐️

~ I was given this audiobook for free in exchange for an honest review ~

Very realistic short story about 2 intermediate divers who decide to explore an unmapped caving system... and the gamble they inevitably take for their chance at a little adventure. I'm claustrophobic and have done a little spelunking in my younger years, so that uneasy and slowly tightening feeling of becoming lost or disoriented and being trapped forever definitely resonated with me while I listened* to this. Because this is a short story, there's really no backstory and not a lot of buildup to the climax, but that doesn't spoil the overall read. The takeaway is still a snapshot of human nature and emotion and perhaps even a keen reminder to be smart and to take proper precautions when exploring with friends 🧠

* I listened at 1.5 speed, which was perfect for taking my time to enjoy the story while not feeling like the reader was dragging.

Gripping

This short story is absolutely gripping! I was hooked from the very beginning. Even for a short story, it had a lot of twists and turns I was not expecting. I would totally read it if it were expanded into a full length novel

Never going cave diving

For 2 people who checked and double checked everything the one thing I realized they didn’t have was a guide string… I think it was mentioned but was it used? NOPE! I would never go into an unexplored cave without a string to lead me back where I came. Otherwise good story.

Story is inspiring.

I listen this at normal speed. Good story. Well worth the listen while I waited at the airport. I didn’t care for the narrator. I am picky but I thought it did a bad job of portraying the female voice. But I will for sure listen again and again to see where they could have prepared for the challenge. I will follow the author for sure.

Are you afraid of drowning in the dark?

Or, does an adventure into the unknown thrill you, despite the prospect of danger. These are the choices that weigh upon two experienced divers when they learn of unexplored areas recently discovered near their home. With an over-prepared mindset, and backups of vital equipment, what will this couple find when they ignore the warnings of others and press on to murky depths in search of a new thrill? Short stories can rarely dive to deeply [sorry, couldn't resist] into the character's backstories, or spend much time on world building, but The Dark Descent does a fine job of setting up a locale, introducing us to the players, and taking us on a journey fraught with danger and difficult decisions. Narration was on par with the subject matter and performed appropriately by Daniel Hord. Enjoy this experience, but don't hold your breath for too long. [Disclosure: I received this title for free and listened at 1.85x.]

A fine little story

It was a decent little short story. Basic but wraps everything up at the end of it.

Excellent Short Story!!

This kept you right there throughout the story. I use to go scuba diving, but never did any caves and I can just imagine how frightened I would have been. The Narrator does a Great job with this entire story. I will need to see if author has done other works.