Mystic System
A Harem Dark Fantasy Adventure Reincarnation, Book 1
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Olivia Neel
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B. Dent
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Many yearn for a different realm, where the allure of enchanting women, otherworldly abilities, and thrilling adventures beckons.
But what if you were born into a world where you're regarded as nothing more than a mere tool, utterly unsuited for their intended purposes?
Plunged into the depths of despair, having lost that which he cherished most, the unmistakable chime of a notification altered not only his destiny but the very fabric of all existence. Yet, whether this change was for the better or worse remained uncertain.
"The host's current vessel is deemed inadequate for the system; physical transformation is underway," "Physical transformation complete; as a one-time reward for surviving, the host may make a single wish to the system."
Embark on this journey alongside Daimon in a world where the so-called 'Gods' are merely mages of higher rank.
Disclaimer: This book is intended for mature audiences. If you don't like a harem and R-18 chapters this novel is not for you.
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Total4 out of 5 stars
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Ejecución4 out of 5 stars
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Historia4 out of 5 stars
- Kindle Customer
- 01-09-25
good
there was alot of grammar problems but I liked it other then that it was a good book
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- Amazon Customer
- 12-06-23
needs an editor
the story is pretty good but between really bad grammar and the voice acting its hard to listen to
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Total5 out of 5 stars
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Ejecución4 out of 5 stars
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Historia5 out of 5 stars
- Tarquil
- 12-04-23
Let's make it simple.
Yes there is some tabu stuff in this book so ether you are fine with it or not.
Personally i like this book, if you have an opened mind and see past current societal norms maybe you will like this one too.
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- Christopher Conatser
- 01-21-25
it was a great story
like I said it was a great story I have only two problems it was the narrator she would try and change your voice for different characters but a lot of the voices kept sounding the same it was almost flat monotone a lot of the times and I couldn't keep up with who is who so I had to get the Kindle book and read it while listening to this overall it was a great story I was very interested in it overpowered main character dark Harem lots of Gore yeah I liked it I just didn't like the narrator
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Total3 out of 5 stars
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- Anonymous User
- 12-04-23
could be better
she mixes the voices and that ha ha can go.
ya it's definitely the voice actor.
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Total4 out of 5 stars
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- Smokyone
- 12-31-23
good story, poor editing, ai narration
i liked the story. the taboo content doesn't bother me.
the narration is clearly AI and when held to the standards of such it's not too bad.
could of used some editing.
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Total4 out of 5 stars
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- Jason Cambra
- 12-23-23
Reminds me of Anya Merchant
I really enjoyed the story but wow the A.I. laugh was so bad. Don't understand why they don't edit.
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- Anonymous User
- 12-26-23
So So
grammar was so bad I really don't see how the narration was as good as it was. also the narrator needs more practice getting the voices the same for each character. but overall the story had a catching storyline if you can move past the gross incest. it was like the author want the reader to overlook the incest by changing the race of mc and mother, and a few other things as well, but then had the mother and son refur to each other as mother and son when in the bedroom. not my thing, but I don't judge.
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- Eric
- 03-02-24
it's decent
I like it but it's annoying to have damond and Dimond mixed in the same sentence.it takes a lot of pieces from diff rpg and it is blended well together.
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- Anonymous User
- 03-22-24
need some of the grammar fixed
a good story but it still needs a little bit of the grammar fixed other than that is great
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