Love at First Light

A Pride & Prejudice Novella

De: Christie Capps

Narrado por: Stevie Zimmerman

A love that began at dawn.

When Elizabeth Bennet demands satisfaction for an insult, she never expects Fitzwilliam Darcy to accept. But the proud master of Pemberley arrives at first light with his honor on the line. What follows is the most unconventional courtship in Meryton's history.

Darcy’s method? Nine clues that reveal a side of him Elizabeth never imagined—vulnerable, witty, and utterly captivating. With each illustration, her anger transforms into something far more dangerous: fascination.

But when a charming stranger spreads lies designed to destroy them, Elizabeth must choose: believe the compelling evidence provided by the stranger or trust the man whose honor she witnessed at first light—the man who has quietly, devastatingly, won her heart.

After all, the most important battles are won at dawn—when you can finally see clearly.

A novella-length variation of Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice for listeners who love unconventional courtships, slow-burn romance, and a hero who falls first—and hardest.

©2025 Joy D King (P)2025 Joy D King

Challenged to a Dual! What will Darcy do?

I have loved each of Christie Capps / J Dawn King’s stories and I think this is now one of my favorites of hers! This has a fun twist that I have never seen before and it was so well done. For those looking for a swoon worthy Darcy this will fit your need. I can’t wait to read it again.

1/7/2026 AUDIOBOOK: the audiobook was released today & I quickly bought it and was very content to revisit this story so shortly after I had read it. I put aside other ones that I am reading/listening to so I can enjoy this one. The narration by Stevie Zimmerman is as always such a pleasure to listen to and one can just disappear into the story to enjoy it.

He's actually called out!

After hearing the insult given at the Assembly, Elizabeth challenges Darcy. Darcy expresses the Colonel requesting the dueling pistols and sword. Meanwhile Elizabeth returns home and enlightens Mr. B. The duel is spectacular! The courtship is so romantic. SWOON! Steve's narrative brings all the emotion forward. She's simply fabulous! What a marvelous and completely unique variation. Short and so very sweet. This one will be among my favorites!

Cute story

In this story Elizabeth retaliates at the first assembly. She challenges him to a duel. It is well written and witty. Great jaff

When Elizabeth Calls Darcy Out—and He Falls Hard

Stevie Zimmerman—excellent as always. I’ve run out of accolades.


“I demand satisfaction, sir. Tomorrow morning at dawn. The field east of Netherfield Park. Bring your second. My father shall act as my second if I can keep him from injuring you first.” —quote from book

This review opening alone tells you this is not your usual premise, and Christie Capps (J. Dawn King) makes every moment of it an absolute delight. I loved this novella. Darcy getting called out by Elizabeth after he insults her at the Meryton assembly made for a fabulous page-turning twist.

I always love it when Darcy is given a particular talent like playing an instrument or, as in this case, he is an artist who cleverly puts his talent to use in wooing Elizabeth. The whole notion of Darcy offering Elizabeth nine clues—little pieces of himself sketched out for her discovery leaves you anticipating the next as much as she, and it turns what could have been a simple apology into a thoughtful, romantic courtship. This Darcy falls hard and honestly, and you feel it in every introspection or utterance said aloud, and every artistic illustration he offers her. Darcy as an artist? Yes, please.

And Elizabeth’s journey—from fury to satisfaction to confusion to something warmer—it all feels believable and fulfilling without ever dragging. There is a chapter of mild angst when Wickham shows up but it is followed by a most romantic conclusion.

Christie Capps always delivers strong dialogue and endearing romances, and this one is no exception. If you enjoy an unconventional beginning, an almost instant attraction, and a Darcy whose heart shows through in pencil and ink, this novella is a must for your Capps/King collection. It won’t be complete without it. Trust me on this.

An Inconsistent Exercise in Doubt

Most JAFF offerings rely on resolving whether ODC will overcome some or several obstacles. The second of two major obstacles in this story arrives late, after resolution of Elizabeth’s initial reluctance through a beguiling courtship by Darcy in the form of a series of pain-and-ink sketches which are all pieces of their courting-story puzzle. While the first resolution is a process which enchants both ODC and readers, the second obstacle for me puts a souring pall over the whole story.
The second revolves around seeds of doubt sowed by one of the usual villains. I found myself restless and annoyed throughout the doubting phase. In order for the doubting to be credible, Elizabeth has to turn off her clear-seeing intelligence and accept a lachrymose series of allegations by the villain; and further has to suspend reader belief in her credibility by engaging in a specious, happenstance, incomplete investigation. The resolution of her doubts involves two explanations, the earlier of which is as happenstance and questionable as her “investigation” and actually ignores the investigative “evidence” in favor of doubt. Discovering close to the end that Elizabeth had used her sound reasoning to resolve the doubt after all does not mitigate her divided personality.
The story’s end brought a satisfying resolution to the centerpiece of the ink-and-paint sketches, which likely mollifies the general readership.
(While the audio performance was generally credible, it too had a few inconsistent and lackluster moments where phrases got disconnected from their sentences.)