Knot Falling for You

A Small Town Why Choose Omegaverse Romance (Starsfalls Omegaverse, Book 1)

De: Winnie Aster

Narrado por: Casie Eller, Denver Adams

Persephone is trying to live the simple life as a barista in the small town of Starsfalls. When a chance encounter presents an opportunity for Seph to help her favorite bookstore, she jumps at it. But things don’t go according to plan. Seph is a self-proclaimed beta who has spent her life avoiding alphas, and working with a hunky alpha architect is not what she signed on for.

Unfortunately for her, alphas are like bobby pins. They multiply and show up everywhere. Soon the alpha architect is joined by his packmates, who hang around the bookstore, and Seph. This poses a problem, because Seph has a big secret that no one would ever guess (or at least that's what she thinks) and now it’s at risk of getting out.

When someone tries to sabotage Seph’s new job, she has to decide if she can trust an alpha (or five). There’s the handy architect alpha. The energetic, fiery alpha with golden retriever energy. An uptight business alpha who could be persuaded to let loose. The bookish alpha professor, who has a sensitive side. And the billionaire, brooding alpha with a checkered past. But no matter what, she’s definitely not falling for them.

Knot Falling for You is a standalone reverse harem romantic comedy. It’s part of the Starsfalls Omegaverse, where HEAs are guaranteed. This is a spicy, slow burn, slice of life romance with one FMC who is the focus of her alpha MMC fated mates. Knot Falling for You is part of a series of standalone novels that can be enjoyed without listening to the rest of the series. See Content Warnings at the start of the book for the spice content and possible triggers.

©2024 Winnie Aster (P)2025 Winnie Aster

Loved the book!!

I read the book way before i listened to the audiobook, and it didn't feel like the same story. The female characters voice delivery was flat, she honestly sounded bored throughout the whole book. It was a struggle to finish.

female narrator is awful

the story is decent, I'm guessing the book is a better read. the female narrator sounds computer generated so the story is not an enjoyable listen.

terrible female narration

the female narrator did not do this story justice. the steamy scenes were about as exciting as watching paint dry. dnf

Mediocre story, bad narration

This is literally the lowest I’ve ever reviewed a book, but with good reason. The female narrator is stiff and stilted. The male narrator has little difference between the various voices for the MMCs, and the attempt at a British accent was laughable given that the native NY/NJ accent could clearly be heard underneath. The book is written in the present tense, and it’s jarring and confusing. It does an incredible job of showcasing the reason the adage “show, don’t tell” exists, because the author delights in telling details (often to an irrelevant level of minutiae) that could be better shown.

I almost DNF, but I try hard to not do that. The basic storyline is decent. I switched halfway through to reading it on Kindle Unlimited to finish the story in order to get away from the abysmal narration. I still hated the present tense writing, and some other things that could have been fixed with a good story editor and continuity editor. But, I ultimately decided it was still worth finishing.

Hence, the divided rating- 1 star for the narration because it was so bad it drove me to abandon the audiobook and finish it on KU, but 2 stars for the story. With better editing, this has potential, but it’s just not worth your credit or money.