Claimed by the Alpha Sheriff (An Mpreg Shifter Romance)

De: Asher Wylde

Narrado por: Virtual Voice

When small-town newcomer Logan Sawyer is wrongly accused, he never expects to find himself in the custody of Sheriff Ryker Wolfe, a rugged and dominant lawman with piercing blue eyes and an unsettling ability to see right through his defenses. Their confrontation sparks a surprising discovery: they're fated mates, a concept Logan never knew existed in a world where werewolves walk among humans.

As evidence mounts against Logan, whose crime novel bears eerie similarities to the real murder, Ryker races against time to prove his mate's innocence. But with a killer on the loose and dark secrets emerging from the past, their growing bond puts them both in danger. Logan must decide if he can trust Ryker with not only his freedom but also his heart, while Ryker struggles to protect his mate without revealing the supernatural world that could destroy everything they're building together.

In a small town where nothing stays secret for long, Logan and Ryker discover that sometimes the greatest mysteries aren't the ones you solve—they're the ones you fall in love with.

For a short book, lots of concerns.

Issues with repetition of information, no indication of chapter change for most of the book, and timeline inconsistencies. Errors that could have been fixed by a proper read through by a beta or otherwise.
Why would a female voice be used for a MM story? That was unnerving.

Somewhat entertaining

Initially I thought this would be a good listen for entertainment purposes but there were a ton of plot holes and things that just didn’t make sense *spoiler* like the human man conceiving and giving birth to children. I can typically suspend my belief in reality for a good plot but this just didnt make sense, and no attempt was made to make it make sense. I’m not entirely unconvinced this was made with AI.

Unfocused First Draft

This is story is so unfocused, redundant, and surface level that it feels like a first draft that didn’t get a read through from the author once it was done, let alone a beta reader or second opinion.

There was not enough world building considering both humans and shifters/werewolves seem to both have alpha/omega secondary gender. It’s not even mentioned outright that one of the men in the pairing is an omega until towards the end of the book.

The logic throughout this book had holes and needed to be better flushed out. I couldn’t see an actual logical reason for the events in the past even after the truth of everything is revealed. Honestly the reason was invalidated by the author themselves bc they gave contradictory information in the monologue towards the end of the first plot. Also the fact that the omega should have shown some level of recognition or familiarity with someone so heavily tied to something that literally shaped the trajectory of his life was COMPLETELY overlooked. So much so, I kept waiting for an explanation that never came.

The first like 2/3 of the book is a “mystery” (there is no mystery, it’s obvious from the start and the pieces “fall into place” repeatedly for the sheriff so often that it’s a miracle it took him 2/3 of the book to actually do something about it considering he figures it out almost immediately). Then the last 1/3 is a slice of life romance about a couple we have no buy in for because the only interaction they’ve had until that point is meeting in person maybe 5 times, one of which was an interrogation. Even the alpha of the pair mentions it’s odd how quickly the omega is just taking this whole hidden supernatural world thing a little too well.

I get it’s a short story, but at least give us more than surface level interactions with the main characters. Their romance feels unearned and honestly I don’t buy the human actually loving the werewolf because everything is time skipped and we never actually see their relationship build or grow. It just bam, cut to everything is all rosy and romantic.

Also there is absolutely no tension in this book between the love interests. They’re both immediately understanding with each other at all times, no questions asked from first sight. The human should have some kind of hesitation/suspicion/level of being on guard with the sheriff initially considering the how the plot starts.

This must be a joke

This story is so poorly written I gave up. It have a inconsistent story line with plotholes bigger than Saturn. My time is not worth this nonsence.

Just awful

I this is just badly written and researched. I can't believe it is so highly reviewed. Anyone who has watched one crime drama or true crime show will see the author put zero research into police procedures. I could only make it through the first hour and a half before I gave up on this title and I feel dumber for it. How do you take you suspect/love interest to multiple crime scenes and put him in danger? How do you let the actual murderer go twice because you want to have a conversation with the love interest that should be there in the first place. I am literally fuming that I waste life listening to this awful, crap fest.

Could Have Been a Contender

In principle, a decent story idea. Execution was lazy. Dialog repetition, plot loops ( but didn’t this just happen), very little attention to building a credible relationship between main characters- fated mate doesn’t mean that the individuals know each other, in the better written novels this process is how we come to know our characters. I know absolutely nothing about the alpha beyond the fact that he is an alpha, pack leader and the town sheriff. An editor would have been a good investment, the story has a lot of potential maybe a rewrite and re-release? Audible, please write a blog post that discusses this tendency toward AI narrations, it is so unjust to authors that I would really like to read a nuanced discussion of this increasing usage, ie please let it be more than “it’s cheaper,” cause it is, but on the other hand, it is also really bad; more often than not I stop after the first few paragraphs, so please, say more.

sparatic and confussing

Constant repeating of the same information. Could not have been proof read at all and the end made no sense at all. Why a female voice when no female was i the story really??