The Novice

The Black Magician Trilogy, Book 2

By: Trudi Canavan

Narrated by: Richard Aspel

Length: 18 hrs and 34 mins

Publisher's summary

Sonea knows the other novices in the Magicians' Guild all come from powerful families, but she also knows she can turn to Rothen and Dannyl for help when she needs it. That is, until someone starts spreading malicious rumours about her – and Akkarin, The High Lord, steps in.

Promoted to Guild Ambassador, Lord Dannyl leaves for the Elyne court. His first order from Administrator Lorlen is to resume, in secret, High Lord Akkarin's long-abandoned research into ancient magical knowledge. Not knowing the true reason for his journey, Dannyl is soon facing unexpected dangers.

Meanwhile, Sonea has almost forgotten the High Lord's dark secret, but keeping the truth hidden may be a grave mistake.

©2002 Trudi Canavan (P)2008 Bolinda Publishing

Critic reviews

'A wonderfully and meticulously detailed world, and an edge-of-the-seat plot, this book is a must for lovers of good fantasy.' (Jennifer Fallon)

'Epic, vivid and believable.' (on Thief's Magic) (The Guardian)

Kept my attention

This book has less repetition than the first one in this series. But the characters repeatedly agonize over the same internal issues - often with the same phrases (e.g. "heart racing"). Despite the style/writing issues, the story is a good one and I am curious enough to finish the series.

Favorite Series!

This is my absolute favorite series! I've read this so many times my 4th copy of the series is starting to fall apart....again lol

The narator has an amazing voice, and does this series a great justice. The way he voices all the different characters is fantastic! The only one I'm 50/50 on would be Akkarin's voice and that is because I always pictured it as deep and refined, but never the less it still fits his personality.

I hope everyone else who reads/listens to this can enjoy the distinct yet subtle amazing qualities to this story that sets it apart from all others.

err, yeah, the story continues, kinda

Any additional comments?

So the story continues from the first book, and 75% of the world building seems to disappear. This could probably stand on its own because there are very few connections to the first book. Unlike the first book, this book gets mired in sexual orientation...which feels forced and overly highlighted...I guess marketing thought it would be a great idea to create some buzz. If it was the main character, it would have added some dimension, but because it was a throw away character...it just feels forced. Ignoring that aspect, the book is about 38 chapters too long. There is some minor growth, but the timeline, travel times..etc, but its all so minor, that its just ugh. If you expect to hear more of the interaction with the city, you might want to adjust that expectation...that was part of world building that was thrown away...as are 98% of the characters from the city.

The performance supports this story, and I will probably get the last book just to end it...because, well, it is a nice waste of time...even if I spend a lot of time swearing at the author and proof readers...or was that marketing...one of them at least.

The Magician's Guild

Very enjoyable listen. This audible book helped me through my spring cleaning. Thank you very much. Your fan.

Got me hooked

Initially it was a little hard to get into and the story did drag out a bit in places but ended up enjoying it. The narration was OK once you got used to it. I liked it and would recommend it

Age appropriate writing for characters

Would you consider the audio edition of The Novice to be better than the print version?

no audio performance was well done

Any additional comments?

Writer needs to write appropriately for the age of her characters. You can not reveal the ages of the characters to be 17 and 15 and then continue to write them like they are no older than 12. Characters were made out to be way too childish for their ages. It became rather annoying and frustrating at times when following the plot.

Great story so far

So far it's an intense and interesting story. interested to see where it goes next. Would recommend

I should have read the negative reviews...

This book wasn’t for you, but who do you think might enjoy it more?

Positive thoughts first. The first book was good. It had a solid story arch and interesting, clear cut character goals. You will likely buy this book to satisfy your curiosity gained from the first one. The narrator for the book did a great job of allowing the characters to have their own personality and really helped to bring the book to life. So you may also buy it because you like the narrator. That said the second book was all but dead, despite his talent. Multiple times I verbally screamed at my headphones.

What was most disappointing about Trudi Canavan’s story?

There is a rule that you cannot practice magic outside of class in the book, but apparently, as the Pirates of the Caribbean put it, “They’re more like guidelines.” The rule is broken over and over again. It would have been better if it never had existed. It ruined my suspension of belief.

Brandon Sanderson, an amazing fantasy writer, wrote this wonderful article titled Sanderson’s First Law. In it he talks about soft magic and hard magic, detailing how magic systems can have hard fast laws or be that mysterious thing that makes our pulse quicken. You cannot solve stories with soft magic because then you have Deus ex machina. Well, in my opinion, the rules are vague enough for the magic in the book for it to be considered soft magic, and the resolution is so tied to magic that I feel that’s exactly what happened at the end: Deus ex machina. (In simple English weak story telling)

Another thing that left a bad taste in my mouth was the inconsistent character decisions. Over and over again I felt like the characters were performing actions to move the story forward, not because that is what they would do. I’d tell you how but so much of the story rested on decisions that I felt were unbelievable or inconsistent for the character.

The story arch was muddled and confusing. It wasn’t clear until the very end of the book what the main character wanted to accomplish… or at least how she was trying to accomplish this goal.

Finally, the secondary story arch was completely unneeded. (More on this later)

Which character – as performed by Richard Aspel – was your favorite?

High Lord Akkarin was masterfully turned into a sinister friend by the narrator. I knew the High Lord wanted things to stay friendly, but at the same time I worried over why he kept his friends in the dark. That said, I never found out. (More on this later).

If you could play editor, what scene or scenes would you have cut from The Novice?

Lord Dannyl’s story arch could have been skipped entirely. If ever it was apparent that an author was trying to push his or her worldview on the reader it would be here. Preachy on the level of a pastor. The relevance to the main story plot could have been stripped out into a few summary sentences and the things happening around Sonea could have been explained more fully.

For example… what on earth is High Lord Akkarin up to? Can he be trusted? That’s what I bought the second book for. By the end of this book, I strongly believed there would be no decent explanation as to why he was keeping his friends in the dark, and by the way, there isn’t an explanation in this book for that.

Any additional comments?

Epilogue. An epilogue isn’t really part of the main story, and yet, it revealed in a few minutes, everything that I wanted to know over the course of the book. In summary, all but the epilogue was a waste of time. She should have focused on covering that content throughout the book and not half of what she did cover. I would have loved a book that focused on the High Lord, versus another novice who antagonizes her like he is 4 years old, with little believable motivation.

My advice, go buy The Way of Kings.

Not Worth a Second Chance

Would you try another book from Trudi Canavan and/or Richard Aspel?

No.

What could Trudi Canavan have done to make this a more enjoyable book for you?

Recognize that old men are likely to have more mature, meaningful inner monologues than teenage girls. Understand Story structure, build a little excitement.

What didn’t you like about Richard Aspel’s performance?

The material he was presenting. I also did not care for the stereotype accents adopted for the characters, they seemed forced and sometimes not appropriate to the character.

Dumbest book ever!!!

I'm down with this author. Nothing about her handling of the bully makes sense. It's so frustrating that I just stopped listening. I'm not finishing this book. I removed book 3 from my wishlist. Moving on to another author/series