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Elseerian: The Chronicles of Lumineia, Book 1 | [Ben Hale]

Elseerian: The Chronicles of Lumineia, Book 1

The assassination of heroes was once a warning... for an invasion that nearly destroyed the world. Nations were slaughtered, cities were erased from existence, and defending armies were crushed into oblivion. In weeks, all life stood on the verge of extinction. But the end did not come. Instead the black horde vanished, leaving terrified survivors... and rumors. As the centuries passed the holocaust faded into legend, and finally myth. Across the southern sea a gifted young man is completing his training.
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Publisher's Summary

The assassination of heroes was once a warning... for an invasion that nearly destroyed the world. Nations were slaughtered, cities were erased from existence, and defending armies were crushed into oblivion. In weeks, all life stood on the verge of extinction. But the end did not come. Instead the black horde vanished, leaving terrified survivors... and rumors. As the centuries passed the holocaust faded into legend, and finally myth. Across the southern sea a gifted young man is completing his training. To him the war is forgotten. To the world a warning goes unheeded. And the killings have already begun.

©2012 Ben Hale (P)2013 Podium Publishing

What the Critics Say

"Well written... highly detailed." (Publishers Weekly)

"Ingenious and immersive." (Best in Fantasy)

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    M. McCormick Texas 04-12-14
    M. McCormick Texas 04-12-14 Member Since 2012
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    "BEWARE the 5-Star Ratings!!!"
    What could have made this a 4 or 5-star listening experience for you?

    I have seen many 5 star ratings raving about what a wonderful book this is. I was sucked in and have now experienced one of the worst fantasy novels of all time. This is NOTHING like ".... Wheel of Time Series, Wizards First Rule, George R.R. Martin, The Warded Man, The Name of the Wind..." that the number one reviewer Andrew Stone mentions. I have read all of those titles (I expect when he wrote George R.R. Martin he was referring to The Game of Thrones). Every one of those books is a great read and I would recommend them without hesitation. How anyone could compare this book to those is beyond me.

    Another 5 star rater, Tim, in Lowell, IN compares Hale's fight scenes to those of Joe Abercrombie. Unbelievable! Hale's fight scenes were excruciating (see below for why). The quality of Abercrombie's (The First Law Trilogy, Best Served Cold, Red Country,.. all of which I have read) fight scenes are so far above Hale's as to not even be in the same solar system.

    And ,in an effort to undo any damage done to another fantastic author by 5-star rater Sharon of Tulsa, OK, who states "I saw this one had good ratings, so I decided to give it a try. I have been looking for books to fill the time until the next Michael J Sullivan book comes out, and with this one, I was not disappointed. While not superb, it is really really good and worth a credit if you enjoy fantasy. I cannot wait for the next books in the series to come out and will definitely be getting those as well." I have read all of Mike Sullivan's books extolling the adventures of Hadrian and Royce. They are phenomenal in their character building, relationships, foreshadowing, fight scenes, and humor, not to mention storyline. Sullivan's books are awesome and highly recommended. To speak of waiting for his next book, and shortly thereafter state that you cannot wait for the next book in this series to come out may make some readers hesitant to try Sullivan's books after listening to this one.

    If I could see any way, writing from an iPad, to respond directly to the reviewers post I would have. I know we all have different taste, but while reading the reviews I notice there was a reader who tried this as their first fantasy book and gave up on the genre. If only he would have tried some of the books/authors the 5-star reviewers mentioned he may have found a new world of reading enjoyment. To have so many talented names associated with Hale's is just an injustice for anyone trying to choose their first fantasy book.

    I will give this book the benefit of the doubt that it may be intended for Young Adult. But even with that said I am afraid that any young reader trying the fantasy genre for the first time would be totally turned off of fantasy by this book. I wish I could contact Bob Watson and ask him to give the genre one more try. :( Here is his post - "I thought I would take a chance on a fantasy book, and it was everything feared it may be. If you are a fan of this genre I am sure it is wonderful. It was like the audio book of an RPG video game. RPG's are boring enough to play let alone listen to." He hit the nail on the head... it is like a roll playing game.

    What could have made this a 4 or 5 star listening experience for me? Not being able to hear the dice roll on the table in every fight scene, or discovery. I am convince that Ben Hale plays Dungeons and Dragons and used one of the campaigns he played in or DM'ed as a bases for this story. While I can imagine that it was a fun game for the players who were vested in their characters, the same joy is not had by the reader. When a tertiary character would intercede with "I think you should xyz", I could just see the mind of the Dungeon Master thinking *These guys are about to mess up if they don't: take a rope; look for tracks first; notice "this" or "that". I better give them a hint.* As for the fight scenes, again the Dungeon Master wants to make sure his players are having a good time and one of the best ways is to have the player-character doe some fantastic maneuvers no matter how unrealistic they may be. Possible example: player rolls a 20 during combat, DM rolls low therefore DM says "As (insert non-player character bad guy name) swings his sword you jump over the blade, flip backwards, catch a horsefly in mid-flip, tie a string to it before you complete the flip, release the horsefly just as your feet touch the ground. As you straighten you are relieved to see that the horsefly has completed a circuit around ____'s neck. You plant your feet, pull the string and ... (DM rolls to see how severe the damage will be) ... you cut his head off." Okay, yes, I am over exaggerating. :)

    *SPOILER*
    The scene where the main character evades the elves by running through the forest, falling in a rushing river, saves an elf that was chasing him, jumps down a cliff with his rope tied to an arrow, swings on said rope along the cliff and lands in a window is filled with one unbelievable dex, strength, and perception check after another. This player must have had a very lucky set of dice.
    On the ship, for some unknown reason the captain keeps deferring to the player-characters. "Should we keep the row boat?" "Okay men, do what the main character just told me to do." So grotesquely unbelievable.


    Has Elseerian turned you off from other books in this genre?

    No. I have been reading in the fantasy genre for 34 years and have read too many good fantasy books.


    What about Derek Perkins’s performance did you like?

    Derek Perkins is an amazing narrator. I liked everything about his performance. If it had not been for his superb performance I would not have been able to make it through the book. I have also listened to him perform in The Godling Chronicles Book 1 (will not be reading book 2. While the story is a good one, and intriging, the writing skill is not there. I believe The Godling Chronicles may be another Young Adult book).
    I am currently listening to Perkins' performance of The Harbinger Book 1. I am only about 1/4 of the way through the book but so far I am enjoying it immensely (great character interaction and humor). Perkins is hitting the voices perfectly. Especially the voice of the female lead. And he pulls off the humor of the book so well my husband I actually laugh out loud as we listen to the story together. (Luckily for my husband he did not listen to Elseerian with me.)


    You didn’t love this book... but did it have any redeeming qualities?

    Does this book have any redeeming qualities? Well, I think if I was playing one of the characters in the role-playing game I would have had a blast. Sounds like the DM has a good imagination and knows how to keep his/her players engaged and happy. So as I listened the author did make me feel as if I could once again be sitting at my dinning table eating chips, swigging Mountain Dew, and trying to perfect my ability to spin a 4-sided dice as I laugh it up with our friends while my husband, the DM, spins a wonderful tale for us to play off of and build our character relationships and abilities as we role-played ourselves up in levels to hero status. But, alas, I will not see these characters achieve that final scene in the game, when the evil has finally been defeated and the characters gather in the tavern, along with one or more of the non-player characters that became a major part of the story, to drink ale and reflect on their adventures. There they sit jesting and laughing, only to become somber when they remember who is not present, those non-player characters who, through the story-telling talent of the DM, found a place in their hearts only to be lost in battle. In short, I will not be reading the second book in the series.


    Any additional comments?

    If you have made it this far through my very verbose review I hope it has given insight into why the 5-star ratings mentioning wonderful authors such as Sullivan, G.R.R Martin, Abercrombie, etc should not lure you in to reading this book.
    If you are not familiar with those authors that have been mentioned then you might very well enjoy this one.

    5 of 8 people found this review helpful
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    campbell Grapevine, TX, United States 01-29-14
    campbell Grapevine, TX, United States 01-29-14 Member Since 2009
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    "Immature author who makes elementary mistakes"

    There are lots of books whose main merit is that they pass the time. They are not great literature, but they entertain nevertheless. There are very few authors who can make characters come alive, can plot a storyline that entrances the reader, who can describe events or a scene so that they leave the page and enter the imagination. I know this, I accept it.

    But the writing in this book is truly awful, even by my unexacting standards. The noise to signal ratio is overwhelming. The characters are flat and interchangeable. The dialog is riddled with "shrugs" and "chuckles" and every other kind of meaningless body language that detracts from meaningful dialog. The utterly empty phrase "without hesitation" is repeated ad nauseam. The hero has every physical accomplishment but lacks everything else: libedo, intelligence, self awareness, humor, ...

    The reader does a very creditable job but the book is unsalvageable.

    10 of 17 people found this review helpful
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    chris roseville, MI, United States 05-17-14
    chris roseville, MI, United States 05-17-14 Member Since 2013
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    "Good story... Ok performance !!!"
    Would you listen to Elseerian again? Why?

    Good story, character interplay & really good fight seans. Good constant pace, that keeps your interest.


    What three words best describe Derek Perkins’s voice?

    Passable at best. The voices meld together tomuch & the 2 main chaaracers sound similar. LOL their male & female. Now that's sad.


    0 of 0 people found this review helpful
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    F3EN PERU, IN, United States 05-16-14
    F3EN PERU, IN, United States 05-16-14 Member Since 2013

    Hello, My name is Levi Brousseau. I'm on a life long mission to find stories that blow my mind.

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    "Don't fear the Reaper"
    If you could sum up Elseerian in three words, what would they be?

    Starts very slow.


    Any additional comments?

    This story starts very slow. If you can get threw that. It finishes strong. Sets you up for the next books .Which I will be checking out.

    0 of 0 people found this review helpful
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    Colin Louisville, KY, United States 04-26-14
    Colin Louisville, KY, United States 04-26-14 Member Since 2011
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    "Adolescent novel?"
    Would you try another book from Ben Hale and/or Derek Perkins?

    Ben Hale no but possibly Derek Perkins.


    Would you ever listen to anything by Ben Hale again?

    Nope.


    Any additional comments?

    M-McCormick hit the nail on the head with that review. I got sucked into this based off the description and the fact it was a recommended listen. Wish I had never wasted a credit on it because I don't think I can even finish it. There needs to be some sort of age appropriate label on these books because this is clearly an adolescent novel. The Godling Chronicles is a similar read in its target audience but you would never know by the description. Anyone who compares this series to others such as LOTR or GOT is off their rocker.

    1 of 2 people found this review helpful
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    Ryan Schenectady, NY, United States 12-23-13
    Ryan Schenectady, NY, United States 12-23-13 Member Since 2013
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    "Good book but, too predictable"
    What did you like best about Elseerian? What did you like least?

    I thought the detail was great, the flow was flawless, the lore matched up through out the book. Only thing I did not like about the series as a whole was it was too predictable, if you have any bit of deductive reasoning you can figure out every that is going to happen well before it happens.


    1 of 2 people found this review helpful
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    Mark L Cumberland RI 11-06-13
    Mark L Cumberland RI 11-06-13 Member Since 2008

    Mark L

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    "The worst kind of fantasy"
    This book wasn’t for you, but who do you think might enjoy it more?

    Possibly YA


    How did the narrator detract from the book?

    His voices for the elves were very similar and for lack of a better term, "wimpy"


    Any additional comments?

    This title was full of the worst cliches in fantasy. SPOILERS AHEAD

    The main protagonist is incredibly powerful (but doesn't know it) but even though he is a master of weapons (he learns how to be a master with throwing knives in one session) he hates to kill. He hates it so much that when his ship of 40 is attacked by 700 (yes 700) pirates he does his best to not hurt them... and in the next book they need to gather EVERY LIVING PERSON from all the races into the elven city in SIX weeks, because then they can last seven days against the oncoming army of a Billion evil minions to give our guy a week to kill a god. The dialogue is very immature and funny, (but it is not intended to be so)

    I do not recommend this title.

    7 of 14 people found this review helpful
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    Blake Brooklyn, NY, United States 10-16-13
    Blake Brooklyn, NY, United States 10-16-13 Member Since 2007
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    "One dimensional LOTR knock off"
    Is there anything you would change about this book?

    I would develop all of the characters a good deal more. There is only one distinct desire that anyone has in the book. Other than that, it's just a display of powers.


    What do you think your next listen will be?

    No idea


    What about Derek Perkins’s performance did you like?

    He had a wonderful voice, and fantastic cadence. It's how I got through the book, I would imagine.


    If this book were a movie would you go see it?

    No.


    Any additional comments?

    The book was deeply shallow. It utilized the low hanging fruit of fantasy tropes without bringing them life. I could not tell you what any character wanted, beyond the lead. I could not tell you what any character looks like, or what their personalities are like. By the end, when they're announcing imminent doom for the land they live in, I rolled my eyes.

    5 of 12 people found this review helpful
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    Randy Columbus, IN, USA 02-28-14
    Randy Columbus, IN, USA 02-28-14 Member Since 2007
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    "Dissapointing."
    What was most disappointing about Ben Hale’s story?

    The story seems to be a conglomeration of many fantasy novels. The story does not seem to play out well and the writing style is weak. I found my attention wondering constantly while listening. Not one I would recommend.


    1 of 3 people found this review helpful
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    Amazon Customer SOUTHINGTON, CT, United States 11-18-13
    Amazon Customer SOUTHINGTON, CT, United States 11-18-13 Member Since 2011
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    "Good Story , if a bit predictable ."
    What made the experience of listening to Elseerian the most enjoyable?

    Solid descriptions and pacing .


    Who was your favorite character and why?

    Didn't have a single favorite , I enjoyed the ajority of the characters


    Any additional comments?

    Good read/listen , I would recommend it to my friends and family .

    1 of 3 people found this review helpful
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