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The Pawn | [Steven James]

The Pawn

Steven James' Christy Award-nominated crime thriller pits FBI Special Agent Bowers against a serial killer who enjoys torturing women. After visiting the mountain vistas where the murderer posed his dead victims, Bowers receives a taunting call from the "Illusionist." Although Bowers gets close, his insidious foe continues to elude him.
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Steven James' Christy Award-nominated crime thriller pits FBI Special Agent Bowers against a serial killer who enjoys torturing women. After visiting the mountain vistas where the murderer posed his dead victims, Bowers receives a taunting call from the "Illusionist." Although Bowers gets close, his insidious foe continues to elude him.

©2007 Steven James; (P)2008 Recorded Books,LLC

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    Bill Kailua Kona, HI, United States 08-29-12
    Bill Kailua Kona, HI, United States 08-29-12 Member Since 2009

    The Path Between the Seas to The Great Bridge ~ Kagan's Peloponnesian War to Gaddis' Cold One ~ Mornings on Horseback to a River of Doubt ~ Tom to Huck ~ Lennie to Charley ~ Cadfael to Cross ~ Rhyme to Reacher ~ Blomkvist and Salander to Wallander and Wallander ~ Moving Cheese or Eating Frogs ~ On the Road and Into Thin Air ~ The End of History to A Short History of Everything to ... well ... everything else.

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    "Entertaining Enough, But Don't Listen Too Closely"

    Enjoyable, but flawed.

    On the plus side, this is an entertaining listen that will keep you engaged. If you overlook a few plot gimmicks, you will probably enjoy this tale. I did and will listen to more of Steven James books.

    James is particularly deft in handling the "Christian inspirational" themes. These wouldn't deter me even if they were handled more forcefully; I enjoyed the Left Behind series which IS much more direct. James, though, uses a relatively light touch that works well and naturally for this story ~ so if this sort of thing gives you pause, there is no need to fear overt moralizing or calls to conversion. This is not that kind of book.

    What you will find are good, but flawed, good guys ~ very bad, bad guys ~ focus on an interesting criminological technique ~ and a creative, engaging plot.

    Unfortunately, that plot is unnecessarily, almost distracting, complex. Narrator Richard Ferrone, ordinarily one of the best, stumbles a bit here, failing to differentiate voices sufficiently to render the multiple villains easily identifiable.

    The plot is also, sometimes, ridiculously contrived. An example: our protagonist, FBI special agent Patrick Bowers, is something of a wunderkind in tracking serial killers. He is in the midst of a search for such a villain who tortures and kills young women; many of them. On a personal level, our hero is also having trouble bonding with his new step-daughter. So instead of planning to spend quality time with her following his violent man hunt, he insists the FBI fly the 17-year-old in to see him, right in the middle of the serial killers' hunting ground. Oh, I wonder what might happen there! (sarcasm).

    Alas, James resorts to this sort of plot contrivance several times. It detracts from the story and renders the characters and the tale less believable. For maximum enjoyment, prepare yourself to overlook this sort of thing.

    Also, don't expect too much in the way of character development. It is all but absent, except in the main protagonist, where it is sudden and not especially well developed.

    And lastly, prepare yourself for moments of tortured, overworked prose. An example: Bowers, preparing to see his step-daughter, observes that he is off "to see this raven, left on my doorstep, by this thing we call life."

    All in all, enjoyable but flawed. There are probably better places to spend a credit (for mysteries/suspense/thrillers, first try Lee Child, Thomas Harris, Michael Connelly, Stieg Larsson, Tess Gerritsen, James Patterson, Patricia Cornwell, Vince Flynn, John Sandford, Sandra Brown, David Baldacci, Jonathan Kellerman, you get the idea).

    If you have already mined these writers, then maybe it's worth giving Steven James a try. I did and am preparing to sample the second in this series, fingers crossed that story-telling improves as the series grows. After all, in one of James' more overt inspirational observations, "Hope is evidence of God."

    13 of 13 people found this review helpful
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    James Collierville, TN, United States 04-23-09
    James Collierville, TN, United States 04-23-09 Member Since 2006
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    "This book hooks you fast!"

    Very powerful start, with a dark side. The plot thickens quickly and you have a real page turner (or in the case of audio ... a real page listener). I would call this a mystery/suspense with a Christian world view. This is my first book by Steven James but it will not be my last.

    6 of 7 people found this review helpful
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    Stephen J. Devries Lake Arrowhead 10-10-12
    Stephen J. Devries Lake Arrowhead 10-10-12

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    "Intense mystery series begins here"
    Would you recommend this audiobook to a friend? If so, why?

    I would recommend this title whole-heartedly. I have not been a huge fan of mysteries, but Steven James weaves a story like a master. I am glued to my player every moment of this story. When I have to stop listening, I can't wait to get back to it,


    Did the plot keep you on the edge of your seat? How?

    If audio-books had pages, this would be a real page turner. Never knowing exactly what twist will come next. I can't get enough Patrick Bowers. His insight into the mind of criminals is amazing.


    Which character – as performed by Richard Ferrone – was your favorite?

    I really like they attitude he gives to Tessa, Patrick Bowers' step-daughter. As the father of a teen-age girl, he somehow nails the inflections and attitude amazingly well.


    If you were to make a film of this book, what would be the tag line be?

    Some times the game hinges on the smallest piece


    Any additional comments?

    The one drawback I found in this audiobook is that Richard Ferrone sounds too old for the character of Patrick Bowers as he is described in the book. This really threw me for about the first hour or two of listening...then the story just got a hold of me and I forgot the small complaint.

    2 of 2 people found this review helpful
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    Neil 11-13-10
    Neil 11-13-10
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    "Can't wait for book four The Bishop"

    All three books where great in this series. Steven James writes them in away that you get to know the charecters better and better. He also makes it so you keep on guessing who the villian is. I had thought i had it figured out in book one but boy was i wrong. If you like a good mystery i recommend these books.

    5 of 6 people found this review helpful
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    Marissa Jenks, OK, United States 08-02-13
    Marissa Jenks, OK, United States 08-02-13 Member Since 2013
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    "First of Steven James"
    What did you love best about The Pawn?

    I've seen this book and series several times but never got around to reading any of James' works. I'm so glad I downloaded this with my monthly credit! I definitely want to read more from this author!
    I really enjoyed the twisting plot! I have to admit that some of the details about what the Illusionist did to his women hurt my head...and I do not have a weak stomach!


    Did the plot keep you on the edge of your seat? How?

    It definitely kept me on the edge of my seat how Bowers tried to get ahead of the Illusionist. I kept guessing where he would go next!


    Have you listened to any of Richard Ferrone’s other performances before? How does this one compare?

    This was also my first to listen to a narration by Richard Ferrone and I do agree with another post/review that at times Ferrone made it difficult to distinguish characters by his voice. Other than that I think he is a great narrator!


    Was this a book you wanted to listen to all in one sitting?

    I definitely wanted to sit down and listen to the whole book at once! I stayed up late into the night more than once listening to this book (then I was scared to sleep! Haha).


    Any additional comments?

    I would definitely recommend this book to others...I loved it!

    1 of 1 people found this review helpful
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    Teresa Lakebay, WA, United States 01-05-13
    Teresa Lakebay, WA, United States 01-05-13 Member Since 2007
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    "Incredibly Suspenseful, Full of Surprises"
    What did you love best about The Pawn?

    This is the first novel in a thriller series, that you don't want to miss. This is my second time around listening to the series, and I can tell you right now that for someone interested in suspenseful thrillers, this is a perfect use of your credits. The author has the ability to tell multiple story lines in the same novel, weaving them together while leaving you hanging on the edge of your seat. I couldn't put it down. Each of the novels in the series builds on each other. They can hang by themselves but to get the most out of them, you should read them in order. This guy, Steven James is great. I think he's even better than John Sandford. Don't take my word for it. Take a chance. Listen to this first one and you'll see what I mean.


    Did the plot keep you on the edge of your seat? How?

    For most of the books in this series, it was really hard to guess who was the antagonist. Or if you knew about one bad guy, you weren't sure if you knew about all of them. And the outcome, who would live and who would die, was not really predictable. You just were never sure. And at the end of each story, the author leaves you anxious to read the next book in the series.


    Which character – as performed by Richard Ferrone – was your favorite?

    The main character, the hero, is Detective Patrick Bowers, and while he is well developed and I like him, my favorite character has got to be Tessa, his stepdaughter. She reminded me of so many of teenage girls I have known. Richard Ferrone delivered Tessa's lines with the punk style of an unusual teenager who is not afraid to speak her mind. For women who might be a bit put off of the gory details of some of the story, I would say that the emotional details and challenges experienced by Tessa are well worth the listen.


    Was there a moment in the book that particularly moved you?

    I would say that in this first book, the moment when Detective Bowers and his step daughter realize that they need to work together to carve out their new life together as a family. Being a family is never easy. And this book illustrates the sacrifices one makes to build a family and stay together during tough times.


    3 of 4 people found this review helpful
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    Brian Belvidere, IL, USA 03-18-09
    Brian Belvidere, IL, USA 03-18-09 Member Since 2005
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    "Well Done Thriller"

    This book kept me interested until the very end. Looking forward to his next book.

    4 of 6 people found this review helpful
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    E. Anderson Utah 02-11-14
    E. Anderson Utah 02-11-14 Member Since 2003

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    "Good Mystery Novel Horrible Narrator"

    The book is a 3/4. It has great villains and the cops are decent. The story developed well with some great twists and wasn't totally predictable. The writer couldn't pull off the heroes humor or coffee quirk though. If it had a better narrator it would have ranked higher. Its not that the narrator did a horrible job, its just that his voice was perfect for the villain who had very few lines, but retched for the hero. The narrators voice turned the image of the hero into a pathetic loser.

    0 of 0 people found this review helpful
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    mark SUMMIT, NJ, United States 05-08-13
    mark SUMMIT, NJ, United States 05-08-13
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    "Ridiculous Plot and One-dimentional Characters"
    What disappointed you about The Pawn?

    The plot is so overly complex and unrealistic to be laughable. The main "good guys" don't foster much empathy and the main "bad guys" don't make any sense. A twisted Jonestown survivor, an evil Governor, a billionaire biotech guy, a psychopath helper, a copycat, the evil CIA cover-up, masters of torture, perfect marksmen, evil geniuses, zombie cult followers murdering their children, dysfunctional FBI teams, genius step-daughter. Stupid, one-dimensional characters. I can't believe anyone liked this book.


    What could Steven James have done to make this a more enjoyable book for you?

    Not become a writer.


    How did the narrator detract from the book?

    The narrator didn't have much to work with.


    You didn’t love this book... but did it have any redeeming qualities?

    If the author had just stuck with one "bad guy", like the Jonestown survivor, it might have been more interesting.


    1 of 2 people found this review helpful
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    Janet ASKOV, MN, United States 03-17-12
    Janet ASKOV, MN, United States 03-17-12 Member Since 2011
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    "Great Book"

    Great book. Kept me interested all the way threw. Can't wait to listen to book 2

    0 of 0 people found this review helpful
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