Sins of the mother can really be the sins of the daughter. The First Kill is where family, sex and blood meet....
©2016 E. L. Cohen (P)2016 E. L. Cohen
Definitely, the mix of the narrator's voice and the quick moving short story.
Most Interesting - the relationships and the murder
Least Interesting - the fact that it was a short story. I think there is a novel here!
She gave Jayla the sultry voice that I can imagine this character having ... refined and sexy
I want more from E. L Cohen! Can we get a novel ... please???
It was short, but an intriguing writing start. I look forward to more from Cohen. The narration really made the story more suspenseful. Black is my favorite voice right now. Waiting for the next short story or novel from E L Cohen.
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