Controlled Asher didn't expect to fall for free-spirited Daniel, but they'll find what they desperately need in one another.
Police captain Asher Penaz's staunch professionalism bleeds into his home life, down to his neatly pressed attire and Spartan apartment. He enjoys being in charge and in control, so his sudden and powerful attraction to the lighthearted, free-spirited Daniel Tover throws him for a loop. In his entire life, Daniel has never gotten what he needs, so he moves to the next place, the next job, the next attempt to find something worth staying for, always landing at the top of his game, but never feeling like he belongs.
The chemistry between Asher and Daniel sizzles, but with all that fire comes the risk of getting burned. As both men struggle to learn themselves while getting to know each other, the lines of desire and control blur. If Daniel and Asher can walk through the flames together, they might find what they desperately need.
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I'm an unabashed fiction fan: mostly M/M, Romance, Erotica, Suspense, Thrillers, Action, NA/YA genres.
Ezekiel Robison is a phenomenal narrator. He brought these characters to life for me. Seriously, he made these characters real for me. My heart pounded, my stomach churned, I waited with bated breath to see what would happen next...and this is all because of just how phenomenal a writer Cardeno C. is. The story is so vivid and realistic for me that I was constantly on the edge of my seat the whole time.
I was totally invested in these characters and this story. Even though I am at odds because I absolutely love and adore Daniel...and just as vehemently hate Asher.
I think Asher is a selfish, inconsiderate, insanely jealous and possessive alpha male (in the worst possible way) asshole who I kept hoping would redeem himself in some way, but who ultimately let me down time and time again. I won't deny I was disturbed by Asher's behavior. The jealous possessiveness and rage-filled outbursts really concerned me. Why I continued to read the story is because of Daniel. Daniel is a treat.
Even though almost every single time Asher does or says something horrible we are assured almost immediately how much Daniel loved it or was turned on by it I didn't buy it. It didn't work for me. I just kept thinking, "Run, Daniel! Run!"
Robison perfectly narrates the whole thing. He brilliantly conveys the growly tones of Asher and the softer, more subtle nuances of Daniel's character. His narration held my hand through the ups and downs. Eventually Asher and Daniel get their hard-won HEA, but I'll admit it's one of the only times I have actively wished for a different ending.
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Listening to Asher as he mellowed and grew as a person the more time he spent with Daniel.
The relationship between Asher and Daniel. How Daniel could calm Asher with a touch, while Asher's touch set Daniel on fire. They really complimented each other.
Emotions, every single one of them can be heard in his voice.
Their first time having actual sex, what happens just before, during and right after.
Asher Penaz commands complete control in every aspect of his life. He is a no nonsense police captain when he's on the job and a brash, sharp, meticulous DOM when he plays. He doesn't do relationships, kisses, romance, boyfriends. No. Asher is confident in his life, until he meets an adorable blonde that blushes, has freckles and trips over his own feet in the middle of an empty room. Daniel Tover stumbles into Asher's life and neither of them will ever be the same. But when push comes to shove, can the cute guy that is most comfortable in his baggy jeans and flip flops, soften the rough edges that constantly surround Asher Penaz?
I was drawn into this book from the first stumble in the hotel lobby in Vegas, and pretty much listening intently with bated breath from that point on. Asher is the proverbial alpha male type. Large, brooding, commands compliance as well as your undivided attention. Daniel couldn't be more opposite, polar, in fact. The very definition of twink to an extent... short, slender, beautiful, blonde and clumsy. Asher has these rules he lives by and one by one, Daniel has him breaking them all. The rude, crude and usually socially unacceptable Ash begins unknowingly readjusting his life to accommodate Daniel. Cuddling, kissing, dating and shock of all shocks, he isn't tying anyone up and inflicting sweet torturous pain on them. It was an absolute pleasure to sit back and listen as Asher went on this journey of self awareness he didn't even know he was on. There was an almost constant monologue of Ash's inner thoughts as his relationship with Daniel continually grew and evolved. But with the sweets, come the sours. About six months in a small lack of communication causes a rift, and Asher does something Daniel may not be able to forgive him for.
At first glance, you might think this is going to be either an insta love story since Asher commands Daniel come home with him after only 48 hours of knowing one another, but it is far from. They fall into a comfortable existence, yes, but with each passing day they learn more about each other, grow closer and start to depend on each other. The whole of this book really is the relationship between Ash and Daniel in great detail. I think my favorite aspect of this story was how Daniel had this kind of calming influence on Ash. A man can't go from one extreme to the other over night though, so there were understandably some speed bumps along the way.
The story was narrated by Ezekial Robison and as I've said before, what he lacks in dialect, he makes up for with emotion. He had this big, loud, brash tone for Ash that was absolutely spot on. Daniel was never able to hide anything from Ash, even from the start; he is very much an open book. Robison was able to clearly express Daniel's moods with differing tones and inflections.
I will say, Asher does something toward the end of the story. It's a compilation of a bad week at work and that slight lack of communication I spoke of earlier combined with Ash's jealous streak the size of Texas when it comes to Daniel. This is probably the worst mistake I have ever seen a fictional character that I liked make. Up until this point, I had been so engrossed in this book that hours would fly by and it felt like 5 minutes. This really pulled me out of the story and had me thinking, what if that had went the other way, would Ash have put a stop to it? That is the only reason I knocked off a notch on my review. Sorry, I can't say, that would be a spoiler.
Overall, this was such a fun read. I was so engaged from start to finish, riding along as Asher learned the meaning of the word Love.
I love to listen to book (sci-fi)especially those involving teens in a sexual loving way. Also series of books that are mysteries/thrillers
This is a great love story of two men drawn to each other and must find the love they have for each other is permanent.
Yes. I love Cardeno C's books anyway, but this really was a good audiobook. Well read by the performer, and an engaging story, over a period of time. It was not insta love. Definitely insta-lust.
I loved his portrayal's in this book. Great inflections in the varying characters. I enjoyed that it wasn't the same voice throughout.
Without question, Asher. He is such an alpha male, you cannot help but remember his personality. He knows what he wants, and nothing stops him from getting it.
But Daniel was memorable as well. He showed such a grace, after being such a wanderer his entire life. I loved it.
I couldn't wrap my head around many things ! what Daniel looked like. In the beginning, he's described as almost a boy-man: looks much younger than his 33 years, skinny and you can see all his ribs. Then at the end, he's so beautiful that men and women are falling all over him. Didn't make sense to me! No connection in between the characters! I get the sense from other reviews that this book is out of the norm for this author, so I'm looking forward to listen something else from him.
*** Audiobook provided to Bayou Book Junkie in exchange for a fair and honest review. ***
This audiobook was narrated by Ezekiel Robison as well, and again he did a fantastic job with most of the characters (the only one that I didn't like was Oliver, truly, he grated on my nerves). Daniel's innocence and Asher's gruffness came across perfectly and it was awesome to hear Asher melt all over the place/be confused with his feelings for Daniel like that. And of course, listening to Cardeno C.'s hot scenes read in that sexy tenor, was just the icing of the cake. Definitely recommendable!
Rating: 4.5 Stars!!!
Not necessarily better--more like it REALLY enhances the enjoyment of the print version as the narrator does an AMAZING job of bringing this story to life.
The scene when Asher strong-arms Daniel accusing him of seeing something else-it shows how emotionally committed Asher already is (even though he doesn't realize it).
When I say he brings this story (and any story he narrates) to life, I'm not just saying that to say it. His voice really gives the characters their uniqueness, demonstrating emotions clearly and making you feel like you are inside the story with the characters...even with those very intimate scenes.
This is the second audiobook narrated by Ezekiel Robison that I've listened to, and it just further cemented my opinion that he does an utterly amazing job bringing these stories to life. He again gives each character their own qualities with his voice, making it easy to know who is thinking or saying something as the story progresses. And with the main character of Asher showing up in The Half of Us, he also retained the same voice for the character which gave great continuity for me going from one book in the series to another.
We get the same brilliant interpretation of the story, and hearing the narrator's portrayal of the characters as the story unfolds really makes you feel like you're right there inside the book.
Yet again a truly amazing audio version, and highly recommended...and again, put those headphones in if you're listening in public because ALL the scenes are brought to life extremely well-including all the hot and sexy ones!
I actually thought it was parody at first. But then it went on, getting worse and worse. The writing is terrible. The premise is ludicrous. The characters are two dimensional at most. There is no attempt to provide any credible motivation for the action. The dialogue sounds like a spoof. I only made it through 3 chapters.
Yes, and by this author in particular. Her output is variable, but she usually writes fair to very good books. Next time I will be very wary before buying another one by her.
No - the voices for all but the two main characters are ridiculous caricatures. Well, actually the MC is pretty exaggerated too.
Bafflement that something so poor could ever be published in print, under this author's name (though I find it hard to believe she wrote it), and that after that it could be recorded for Audible. It's a terrible, terrible attempt at a book.
I am definitely returning this one.
I purchased my ebook copy of this book, but was gifted my AUDIO copy.
Police captain Asher Penaz’s staunch professionalism bleeds into his home life, down to his neatly pressed attire and spartan apartment. He enjoys being the man in charge, and leather bars satisfy his need for dominance—so his sudden and powerful attraction to the lighthearted, free-spirited Daniel Tover throws him for a loop. In his entire life, Daniel has never gotten what he needs, so he moves to the next place, the next job, the next attempt to find something worth staying for, always landing at the top of his game, but never feeling like he belongs.
The chemistry between Asher and Daniel sizzles, so Asher invites Daniel home. As both men struggle to learn themselves while getting to know each other, the lines of desire and control blur. With all that fire comes the risk of getting burned. But if Daniel and Asher can walk through the flames together, they might find what they desperately need.
Control, thats all Asher needs, and Daniel sends that control spinning! After meeting him, right in the first chapter, Daniel evokes thoughts and ideas in Asher that he didn't know he wanted, needed, even. And Asher fights all the way pushing Daniel to his very limits.
Each man has his say, and you get each and every emotion, as if you were there in the room. You feel as Asher pushes Daniel, as Daniel pushes back, and when Asher finally pushes too far, when Daniel snaps.
I loved watching Asher unravel, and fall apart, faced with Daniel chipping away at his control, and it made for an amazing read.
Now, maybe, for some reason, I expected something else for this story after reading the blurb, I really don't know what, BUT I found this an unexpected delight! Don't get me wrong, I knew it was going to be good, I've not read a bad one from CC, I just seem to find it took a turn I didn't see! Its really weird, what I'm trying to say, but I hope my point gets across!
Suffices to say, I loved this book, and will be reading the second in the series next. These are a series, BUT can be read out of order and as stand alones.
Independent reviewer for Archaeolibrarian, I was gifted my AUDIO copy of this book.
Ezekiel Robison again narrates.
I said in my review for the audio of The Half Of Us that I would give this narrator a second chance and I did. I really tried to like his narration of this book, but I couldn't.
His voice again dips in random places, and the voices he gave to Asher and Daniel, Asher especially, were all wrong.
And because of the dipping, and the so very wrong voice of Asher, I couldn't finish listening. I'm so sorry that I couldn't and I know that some audio reviewers will love his work, but I am one who cannot.
My unfinished audio narration does not affect my original book rating.
5 stars for the book
2 for the narration.
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"Outstanding perfect match with twists and turns"
Ezekiel Robinson's narration brings the story to life in a way that didn't detract from my enjoyment of the original book, rather he enhanced it. His voices perfectly matched the character development and I was quickly enveloped in the world of Asher and Daniel.
Like all Cardeno C stories, there is an instant attraction and a love that develops which is very satisfying. The story is character driven and we see good development. Asher isn't a relationship guy and Daniel has never had a real home, but they find exactly what they need in the other man. There are twists in this tale though and a period of heartbreak, but a fully agreeable HEA makes this a feel-good listen.
Ezekiel's narration is gentle and thorough. He lightly dramatises the story and I found myself drawn in from the outset.
When Asher lets Daniel down badly, and Daniel runs away, I actually cried for their losses. Restitution comes though!
A wonderful story of love and finding a place. Highly recommended.
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