Gothic Paranormal Witch Polyamory MMF
Not only did I find Mr. Right, but he has a brother, and they're both mine!
A witch maiden is rescued by two handsome noblemen who want to fulfill her every wish. Can they protect her from the church's attempts to eradicate witchcraft?
12,000 hot and sexy words! This is part 1 in the trilogy.
©2014 Harley Baker (P)2014 Harley Baker
I enjoyed it, but I knew I wasn't reading classic literature. The main character is a traditional marysue: odd colored eyes, universally liked by all but the villain, specially skilled or powered. Plot devices give a cursory explanation as to why the men are not jealous but willing to share her, but the lead up to the threesome seems a little abrupt. Unlike ideal polyamory, there is very little discussion about consent on all parts, but for the sake of time at least there is something nominal. The narrator was not great and hit some inconsistent notes in the delivery of the dialogue, plus seemed a little over animated. On the good side, the pace of the story is quick, the mood and descriptions synch well, and the characterizations were clear and consistent. Important to this kind of fiction, the world is consistent and the eroticism was pretty hot. Overall, I liked it, and will buy the next book to find out what happens next.
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