Promising start. Around the middle the wheels came off.
The narrators were fine. I like the concept of using a group of narrators. It reminded me of a radio drama, in a good way.
The pedophile scene was gratuitous and disturbing. I would have cut pretty much everything from the midpoint and asked for a different ending.
This recording can be salvaged to some degree by remixing the sound. Often the spoken word was obscured by what was supposed to be the background noise. The opening scene was a prime example--the rain was so disproportionately loud, they may have just as well been standing next to Niagra Falls.