When Deathworlders Meet Complete Book | Humans are Space Orcs | Hfy

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Great story

Great job! The narration could have been better, but overall great job! I love the concept of humans actually being powerful for once, instead of everything being a threat to us.

Mid Book, Warning Spoilers Included

First off the world building by the author is great, it is difficult to build a world in a few short chapters and make it as rich as he did. However I have several complaints, the first and formost is the author does not know how to write a love arc, it felt forced and fast, almost cringy at times with their "M'lady" dialog. Look man, you got to hear this but it was cringe, it felt like a self insert of a reddit neckbeard who has never felt the touch of a woman before. I'm not insulting you yourself as a person, just how it came off as. You excelled in telling a clever story about a human who was smarter than he looks and you would likely excell writing a story about a human merchant or ambassador navigating a newly discovered galaxy. Second your voice pronunciation was sometimes difficult to understand especially at the beginning. The quality significantly picked up near the end though. The twist at the end where its revealed that theres three of them wasn't forshadowed enough and can be improved.
Overall a good book OP, not great and not bad.