• Watching Carmella

  • Seduced by her Green-eyed Coach: Sex Games: The Olympic Events You Won't See on Television, Book 3
  • By: Paris Rivera
  • Narrated by: Beverly Klondike
  • Length: 25 mins
  • Unabridged Audiobook
  • Categories: Erotica, Literature & Fiction
  • 4.5 out of 5 stars (22 ratings)
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Publisher's Summary

Watching Carmella tells what happens when green-eyed Coach Hernandez is charged with being chaperone to the gorgeous, young Latin hockey star Carmella.

Carmella and Milana's biggest mistake, when they eventually awaken, is to head back to their room together. They have missed the morning team meeting for the Uruguayan Olympic field hockey team, and when Coach Gloria Hernandez spots them together, she puts two and two together.

Both young women look exhausted, and they have not even showered! They are certainly too tired to play in the match against Japan that day. Angry and indignant, Coach Hernandez announces they will be fined the equivalent of $2,000 each ,and she would be moving into Carmella's room that evening. "If the mice are going to play," as she puts it, "then the cat cannot afford to stay away!"

Carmella, 20, acceptesthese disciplinary measures without complaint. Later, confined to her room, she finds out that Uruguay has lost their qualifying game that day, and she knows that the absence of Milana, 28, and herself damaged the team. All she wants to do now is get some sleep and try to make things up to her teammates in the following game. So it is with some relief that Carmella retires to bed at eight o'clock, sure in the knowledge that Milana's subversive and exciting influence has been forcibly removed, with Coach Hernandez standing guard like some kind of old-fashioned chaperone.

Yet for some reason, Carmella wakes in the night and opens her eyes. Immediately she shuts them tight! She cannot quite believe what she has seen.

Across the room Coach Hernandez is lying wide awake in her bed, her large eyes staring intently at Carmella!

©2012 Paris Rivera (P)2015 Paris Rivera

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First timer

I got to listen to this for free courtesy of the author. This is the third in a series and I think if I had know. That I would have enjoyed the setting/story more?! This was 27 minutes so a little short for my tastes but I think because I had no previous experience with this type of book so my expectations were not really appropriate for what it was ;) The performance was really great although I personally prefer to have the narrator say “I moaned” vs hearing the narrator moan but that’s just me. Over all it was definitely hot and I’m sure had I listened to the two previous audio “books” I would have enjoyed the story even more.

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Short but steamy!

Great sex scene. Didnt realize it wasn't an entire book. It was hot though. It left me wanting more. After reading that, I need to go shower!

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Quickie

I got to listen to this at the courtesy of the author in exchange for a quick review. This isn’t my typical listen, but if you’re into girl on girl happy times it’s worth getting into. The narration is... how to put it... believable *wink, wink* Very convincing, and the narrator has a nice voice to listen to in general anyway.

Personally I prefer heterosexual pillow parties, but if I was more interested in the lesbian love affair I’d definitely be getting more.

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Relax and enjoy

I agree with the coach's relaxation techniques. Of course listening to them was more exciting than relaxing.

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Steamy Listen

The narrator was perfect for this steamy listen. The story is a alow build to a climactic ending. This story is definitely worth listening to over and over and over again!

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Another great fantasy comes to your ears with Paris Rivera’s Watching Carrmella- she really knows how to pen the steam and capture the moments for you to enjoy! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️✨❤️🎧❤️

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after the game

what the coach does to help out one of the star players whom been playing around with other to help relax in certain way s of all the new way or work out

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Short and sexy!!!

This really hot, fast paced and erotic story certainly packed a punch when I got caught up in it, just hoping that it could continue much longer! My gosh I loved listening to the narrator, her voice is so very sexy!!!

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Coached deliciously!

Milana and Carmella get themselves into quite a mess. it means Carmella will now be watched over by her coach. Personally!
A coach so good you'll want her to be yours! Personal, and in control. What more could any young woman want? Maybe the opportunity to be coached into a release.
You can almost feel the stare, and find a sense of admiration , when those eyes are looking straight into yours. it is an absolute Must-read!!

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Sex Games

Would you listen to Watching Carmella again? Why?

I listened to it twice, but the narration isn't that great. I would read the ebook it again though.

What was one of the most memorable moments of Watching Carmella?

There was a mention of a hot dog slipping between two buns that made me giggle a bit.

Did the narration match the pace of the story?

No. The narrator seemed like she was reading slowly to sound sexy, but it came out too forced and brought the story to a crawl.

If you were to make a film of this book, what would the tag line be?

I love "The Olympic Events You Won't See on Television" that the author used. It's perfect.

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  • Sarah
  • 10-03-20

A short FF Erotic story

Watching Carmella was competently narrated by Beverly, I loved her voice and her pacing. As an Audiobook standpoint I can't pick a fault with it really. The actual spoken moments felt awkward and misplaced when compared to the characters inner monologue and I could have done without that. This story is a short FF erotic story and it does exactly as it says on the tin. If you are looking for a story that is heat, steam and sex then this is it. I personally prefer something with a story and this wasn't it.

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  • Jude
  • 09-27-20

Another fun and steamy story

Another hot and fun story by Paris Rivera!

The characters in this one are a young Uruguayan Olympic hockey player and her green-eyed coach. I can’t say the author lacks imagination but let’s be honest, the plot is mostly a pretext to get to the moans and groans. Definitely NSFW.

Rivera delivers once again, with that little touch of humour that makes it all fun when it could be sleazy. And as usual, the narration is excellent.

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  • 08-06-18

Unbelievably sexy

Paris has such a talent in writing hot and sexy scenes. This book has no touching between the two characters for the most part but melt my panties off it is as hot as any sex scene I’ve read where they are all over each other! Great writing Paris, keep them coming!!