Time Man

Time Travel

“Four years! Four years! Four years!”
Gil’s mind was spinning, but he could hear the voice: “Four years! Four years sent back.”

Adventure awaits when a one-hundred-and-fifty-year-old man is sent back in time and accidentally gets stuck as his fourteen-year-old self again. Gil Teeny is forced to make "the best of things" until he waits out the four long years in the small town he grew up in. Facing down former bullies, trying out for every sport, falling in love with his wife again, and even learning the secrets behind the shadowy mysteries of time travel; Gil has a chance to do it ALL again... but this time? He intends to do things right!

Virtual voice has no voice.

I liked the overall concept of Time Man, but virtual doesn’t do it for me. I come from a place where I read to my kids and used inflection, and tone when I did so. If everything is said with the same tone it is hard to decipher action or intention of what is said.

it was short

virtual voice is terrible. I won't listen to another book with virtual voice instead of a real person.

Fun!

Although I am not keen on the virtual voice, I absolutely loved the book! Excellent concepts and follow through!

Good quick short story

Good quick story that keeps you interested if not addicted.

The story line is good in my opinion
I didn’t like how it flashed through so much so fast
The AI narration was better than I thought it would be I thought it was going to be like a Reddit short story AI but was better than those

Short and Sweet

Time Man is one of those stories that you wish could happen to you. A well written short story that leaves you wanting more and a story you will always remember.