The Whetstone Fist - A LitRPG Series

Episode 7

By: Brian K. Declan

Narrated by: Virtual Voice

Civil war. Arrogant brothers. And an overbearing father. Lock and Lucas are back for another adventure. In the wake of Season 1, our young heros are left to pick up the pieces of a broken nation. A corrupt military, a shattered gate-network, and a looming threat of war. All these challenges lie before them, but the toughest those they trust the most. Family.


Really good stuff…
★★★★★ “Pros: characters and the relationships between them are great, pace is great, story is great (thanks for not flashing stats every two minutes!)

Cons: books are short but published often (so sort of balances out but at these lengths it would be best to publish even faster), some typos… not a problem for me but some people are fanatical about it. I just highlight the errors as I go. I don’t know if authors can see that somehow, so they can go back and make corrections if the want??

Overall, it’s a good fun read. I’m looking forward to a lot more of this series. Thanks…” -Mark Twain-

Pleasant quick read
★★★★ “Engaging main character, enjoyable read. Straightforward story line. Standard litrpg cave system. No significant setback to allow much character growth. A growing friendship, but even less character development for her.” -snarsdale-

Engaging Fantasy Story
★★★★ “As a fan of fantasy, I have enjoyed the reading this story on the run. Good story. Look for more to come!” -Irene-

Good story but…
★★★★ “It loses points for grammar mistakes and spelling errors, it's like the author didn't bother to get a good grammar or spell check program when writing this, now the upside, engaging story, litrpg mechanics that dont take up half the book, interesting characters

Entertaining read.

The AI voice doesn’t do the story any favors! Otherwise it is a good story.

Broken english

If you want a story were the characters all use broken english and bad grammar this is the book for the you. As for me ill pass so i dont have to cringe every other sentence. Gangster speech is not for me