The Transgender Spell 1 to 3

Having found the sorceress in order to warn her of the King's edict, Michael is shown just how powerful magic can be. However, being turned into a woman wasn't exactly the reward he expected.

This story is graphic in nature and is intended for adults only. All characters depicted are 18 or older.

©2017 Carl East (P)2017 Carl East

Not too bad

Was hoping for something a little different but this was really good. Not for a transgender market sadly. Content might make one dysphoric.

Crap

Not what I wanted not what I thought it was going to be not a very interesting story

could easily be 1/3rd shorter

the narritive has nothing to do with the title.
it is almost half sex scene which come on with little to no motive and do not progress the plot or influence character bonds.

that said, if you skip the sex the plot is simple but salvageable.
i am going to look to see if there is more because as it is there is not a real conclusion, just a meandering stop.

i realise this is supposed to be erotica. but that does not mean it gets a pass on what makes complete writing. this is incomplete and needs polish to tie it together and make it good.