The Tom Riddle

The story begins with an eight-year-old Tom Riddle at Wool’s Orphanage. A chilling, isolated child, Tom unnerves the caretakers and other children with his uncanny ability to “make things happen.” He punishes a bully by luring him into a trap involving a snake, foreshadowing his future connection to the dark arts and Parseltongue.

In his fifth year, Tom discovers the Chamber of Secrets and awakens the basilisk. Using it, he begins targeting Muggle-born students, framing Hagrid to avoid suspicion. This solidifies his belief in his destiny as Slytherin’s heir.

Confused

So we don't really understand what this is supposed to be. Just like the Dumbledore one this doesn't really make much sense specially timeline they're talking about Tom Riddle after school getting a following and how and Bellatrix was joining him but they were not anywhere in the same timeline as him because Tom Riddle went to Hogwarts in 1945 is when he ended… And snake went to Hogwarts in1970 something so Snape and Tom Riddle were not friends ever… It was only when he became Voldemort..... 

The story was very well written and entertaining ! - I highly recommend for anyone who cant get enough of Harry Potter

I would have given this 5 stars for each category but the AI reader mispronounced several key words

ΑΙ Garbage

The story was so far from accurately working within the cannon of the Wizarding World - utter nonsense.

Tom Riddle

This has facts that are out of generational context! It would help if you at least read the Harry Potter canon to establish your characters time lines!! And before you read the book to others learn how to pronounce the names of the characters! Find a real person to read this and it might be more enjoyable! To many points are not in line with the books written by JK Rowling! To an avid Potter fan you have created to many thoughts of your own that do not line up with the written books. It is ok to speculate about the happenings of Tom or Voldemort- however keep what already is written already as your baseline. Embellishment of the rest would be interesting. Your departure from what was written is just like when a book is adapted to a screen play (everything can’t realistically be included) and things are changed!! It is irritating and in book form serves no purpose !!