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Publisher's Summary

Redhead succubus joins the harem....

©2018 Eric Vall (P)2019 Eric Vall

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AUDIBLE, FIX THIS ! The editor fell asleep.......

this book had a lot of editing glitches ( bloopers), almost all of them were in chapter 15 and 16. You have the opportunity to listen to part of the recording process. When one of actors would flub a line or mispronounce a word, you get to hear it, followed by "TOCK TOCK TOCK " and then the correct line. Two or three times would have been funny ( the first was hilarious and I hope it's left in). Unfortunately it happened so many times , it became annoying. I think the editor fell asleep on the control panel , while editing the final cut. I could be that they forgot the save the edited segment and uploaded without a quality check. ...the distraction slightly took away from the stroy. It was in no way as bad as the abomination of a production the "Twin born" trilogy was. I honestly hope both of these books will be fixed.

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Great story, buuut...

There were several times where the readers would slightly backtrack because of mis pronunciation or other reasons. kinda broke immersion of the story

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chapter 16 needs to be redone

the talkers keeped on messing up. the talkers kept on stumbling. they kept on having small correction.

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Great book, but too many audible errors.

Great book (not finished yet) but I had to stop to point out how many errors there are on Audibles side. Throught the the book, mainly chapter 15, 16 and 17, the voice actors errors have been left in. them stuttering followed by the start stop clicking completely took me out of the experience. Love the story though. great characters, plot and Humor. Audible just needs to edit the audio.

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bloopers left in take you out of the mood

while I like the story and the voice acting was decent, in the last three hours of the performance they left all the bloopers in the recording. you hear a click and a repeat of the same line. it gets distracting and takes you right out of the story.

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Could have been a four star performance

This is a great story with great voice acting (much better than single narrator), but the audio editing left errors and retakes in. Chapter 16 is a mess.

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Great Book

I could not give full stars on the performance since it appears that there may have been some oversight in chapter 16. It sounds like the producers of the audiobook left their notes and stop points and did not clean up but other than that and maybe one other time the audiobook was great.

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Incredible follow up... rough sound editing

Eric Vall and Jessica Threet are an awesome combination. I’m glad to see book two out so soon but it needs a few more minutes of editing. I really love this story line and the main characters. I even found several of the editing goofs extremely funny “LOLA...( f’ing Lola) *click click* NOOOO!!!” Leave that one the background commentary is awesome. (Normally I don’t sound like that but Todd has rubbed off on me a little) However, the boardwalk scene was extremely painful because it had so many. I’m totally looking forward to book three and even a few funny Easter eggs of commentary if needed. You guys rock so please keep it up.

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Great story, but...

The editor fell asleep during chapter 15. Though, it was kinda neat hearing the outtakes? My review would have been 5 star all the way, but all the F-ups in editing really hurt the overall.

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The editing is atrocious

If you liked the first book you’ll enjoy this book. However, the audio editing on this book is the worst I’ve ever seen on Audible. Chapters 16 and 17 are rife with breaks in the recording where the actors made mistakes during the reading and the editor left them in. It’s extremely jarring the have the same line read repeatedly twice or even three times. To compound this problem not one person involved in this audio book bothered to listen to the final product. If they had this would have been easily rectified. Hopefully, it will be fixed and the book will be rereleased. If that happens I’ll continue with the series. If not, this is the last book in the series that I’ll listen too.

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  • Mr A Baker
  • 06-30-19

Not finished editing!!!!!

In the first book there is an instance when the car brakes down that the narrator losses character & laughs this added to the moment! Chapter 16 sounds like it’s a first pass you hear the mic clicking on and off and delivery advice being give this is not professional or finished! I cannot recommend before fixed. First 15 chapters seemed fine.

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  • Anonymous User
  • 06-10-19

Great story by Eric Vall but serious editing issue

This was soured by dodgy editing from chapter 16 onwards. Completely unprofessional final editing or lack of should I say.

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  • MR D W SMITH
  • 01-04-20

editing needed,

and someone need to listen through the book so you do not have to listen to the editing.

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  • Kindle Customer
  • 12-02-19

chapter 15 needs editing

chapter 15 is in serious need of editing, with loads of clicks and repeats of dialogue, it completely ruins the chapter

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  • Kindle Customer
  • 10-26-19

click click

Who did the editing!? Why are there clear mistakes that should have been cut in the middle of the audio book!? the whole dinner scene and after! It detracts from the rest of the performance! Now I don't know if I should buy the next on the series!

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  • James martin housby
  • 07-20-19

So disappointed with the editing after chapter 16

The story carrys on well from the first book but it's all spoiled due to the poor editing after chapter 16. Microphone clicking on and re hashing the words completely destroys the flow of the story.

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  • Kindle Customer
  • 07-15-20

dejabu

Or my phone went nuts, or there is a repeated chapter. the conversation with raphael after they ask for chinese food in the mansion and after the hot dogs...

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  • GoosFraaba
  • 06-13-19

fix chapter 16

please fix bloopers in chapter 16. if you liked the first book, you'll like this one

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  • Paul Mills
  • 11-06-20

Enjoyable listen

Good story and one I was happy to listen of. Only complaint is that during the reading the narrators would make mistakes and you hear a click then they repeat the phrase again. I would like to see those edited out. Apart from that it was good listening 👍

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  • Dale
  • 07-30-19

fun, entertaining, good humour, sexy

another really enjoyable book in the series, really liked it as i did the last. my only issue is, as many have stated already, the poor editing on chapter 16 i think it was. not overly bad but very irritating when you have the voice actors doing 2 takes of lines throughout the the whole chapter. if that was fixed id have no issue. regardless, the book was great and the voices perfect, if you like the first one then definitely get this one.

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  • Kindle Customer
  • 07-01-19

Chapter 16

The clicking at chapter 16 is quite frustratingly annoying. I can't deal with it. At all

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  • Mitchell
  • 06-25-19

Editing problem.

There is a problem in chapter 15 or 16 you didn’t edit it properly and left retakes in it bro.

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  • Captain Skurvy
  • 06-10-19

Very bad sound editing

Needs to be re edited as there are many errors where the narration errors need to be removed it ok for a few to get though but this becomes annoying when many happen in a row and it’s not picked up. 10-6-2019 ♿️🖖🇦🇺

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  • Anonymous User
  • 06-10-19

good apart from chapter 16

chapter 16 is unedited which starts to get annoying as the chapter goes on for a while

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  • Anonymous User
  • 06-06-19

Another one down!

i cant get enough of Eric Valls books. this series its awesome. there were some reading bloopers that were around but it bearly detracks from this great story. Can't wait for more!