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One False Step: A Dark Mafia Erotic Billionaire Stepbrother Romance Story for Women

The Billionaires Mens Club Erotica Stories Series, Book 1
Narrated by: Denise Black
Length: 3 hrs and 27 mins
3.5 out of 5 stars (7 ratings)

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Publisher's Summary

“We both wanted this Leigh,” McKale said, confusion clearly coloring his voice, “why are you shutting me out?”

Leigh Pulson has spent the past three years away from home trying to escape the Coleman name. 

But when McKale Coleman arrives on her doorstep one evening, Leigh knows that her time of freedom is about to be cut short.

Leigh has long since tried to suppress her scandalous attraction to the tall muscular handsome McKale…but the man himself holds no such illusions. 

McKale - the billionaire heir to the Coleman fortune - has been tasked with finding Leigh and bringing her home…whether Leigh wants to or not.

Along the way McKale offers Leigh every temptation, while Leigh tries her hardest not to give into her darkest desires.

Authors Note: This book was previously published under the title My Steps Wants and depicts sensually mature situations.

©2018 Charlotte Union (P)2018 Charlotte Union

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  • AB
  • 04-11-19

Different Narrator

OMG!! the narrator is terrible. Her male voice is horrible and don't get me started on the sex scenes. The narrator should not narrate erotic romance. I don't think I can listen to another book narrated by Denise Black.

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aweful narrator...not dark mafia romance

Narration was one of the worst I have come across. she did not give life to those characters. It sounded like storytime. Her pronounciation of 'again' made my hackles rise. Her speaking the male voices was a nightmare! Her reading the sex scenes was cringe worthy!!

This story was not dark and had absolutely nothing to do with mafia romance!!

There were multiple times, I questioned whether the author was aware of a female's anatomy. There was a scene where the h said she preferred being taken from behind because her clit would receive a proper rub if his manhood was big enough...!

All in all, definitely not worth a credit. I am definitely making sure never to purchase an audiobook eith this narrator EVER again.

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not bad

She ran away from her step daddy and step brother since the srep brother refused to run with her and now she had to come back after they went into her apartment and got her things to make her go back

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  • K
  • 12-11-18

Short story romance

This was a great story. Had more depth to it than many short stories, particularly erotica stories. Good story and hot scenes! I was given this free review copy audiobook at my request and have voluntarily left this review.

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hot

a very hot steamy and outstandingly interesting Book for a book free hours it was so intense and so well-written I enjoyed it enormously mckale is hot as hell!
I was given this free review copy audiobook at my request and have voluntarily left this review

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  • Jan M
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  • 12-01-18

Not what I expected

I was expecting more Mafia type action in this listen. The authors, Charlotte Union and Theda Sinclair, wrote a decent story that just needed more details in the background and less focus on the sex. To me the sex was overdone, and the base story underdone. The narration by Denise Black fit the book. I requested this review copy audiobook and have voluntarily written this review. To me, erotic romance is not all sex, but how they say it to make it sizzle. This book did not have the "sizzle" but rather lots of sex.

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  • A D.
  • 12-11-18

Erotica with a hint of corporate

This book is short and sexy. The two authors do not waste too much time on unnecessary dialog, explanation or events. The scenes almost hop from one sexual encounter to the next with a bit of explanation that leads the audience to the climax of the plot. To be fair the plot is good but very brief, a little to my disappointment. That said, the title does indicate this is erotica and it definitely delivers.

This book was given to me for free at my request and I provided this voluntary review.

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  • Natalie
  • 12-04-18

More sexy than story

Thank you to Charlotte Union for giving me a free code in return for an honest review. This was a good story. I would have liked a lot more detail however and a little more focus on the story. It was very sex focused, although it fit in well, I'd have liked a little more story and character development, I wouldn't hesitate to grab another book by these two authors as they obviously have great imaginations that fit very well in the style of stories that I like.