Nickel

Fallen Lords M.C. series, Book 1

By: Winter Travers, Jennifer Severino - editor

Narrated by: Melissa Barr, Paul Brion

Length: 5 hrs and 55 mins

Publisher's summary

Simple. Neat. Orderly. A place for everything, and everything in its place.

Karmen Handel's life growing up had been anything but quiet and simple. A deadbeat father, a mother who never wanted her, and a grandmother who could care less created the perfect recipe to ensure Karmen built a wall around herself and never let anyone in.

When her past comes back to haunt her, Karmen has no one to help her. Until Nickel.

Complicated. Dirty. Restless. Live to ride. Ride to live.

Nickel Cunningham lives free with the brothers he calls family and has never craved anything more until he met Karmen. The shy, quiet nurse who cares for his grandma caught his eye months ago, and he hasn't been able to get her off his mind since. Nickel knows what he wants, but he's never had to fight for it before. Until Karmen. Contains mature themes.

©2017 Winter Travers (P)2018 Tantor Audio

Loved it

I loved the alpha males in this book. Strong and bossy and to match, the females in the story are just as sassy. The end wrapped up rather quickly and I would have liked a little more of a conclusion, but maybe that comes within the series. Give Nickel a try. I think you’ll love him.

Really no story

Really enjoyed the love aspect but Jumped around a lot like a story in fast forward.
Needed more “meat” / substance.

Great series

Fantastic book I now have a new author to binge on I love it when there is not only a male and female narrator but when they can also do a decent other gender voice it just makes the book even better

female narrator is so whiny

I usually don't write reviews unless they are favorable. I figure just because I did not enjoy a story doesn't mean others shouldn't give it a chance. So this is more of a "heads up" not a review.
I couldn't get past the 4th chapter the female narrator turned me off. The heroine is written as a shy somewhat meek woman in her early 20's however for the most part the narrator portrayed her almost in the light of a whiny teen constantly on the verge of tears. I'll be purchasing the kindle edition since I can tell the story is worth the read.

No MC action

This book was mostly a love story between a young nurse and an MC biker. Most of the problems were related to her. So MC problems were not involved

Narration the worse

Really? I can’t believe the other reviews, now don’t get me wrong the storyline isn’t bad but the narration is the worse! There is nothing sexy in the tone of the narrators! The female is tolerable but the male needs to be recast, just terrible!

Author to watch...

This book had plenty steam, romance, comedy and action, well written with a feisty female lead and a sexy alpha male who isn't a d*ickwad. I really enjoyed it and I think this is definitely an author to watch because with a few changes would be a bestseller author. The biggest thing I would tweak is, it needs more plot... add some twists or mystery, lead up to the intial romance a bit more and the bedroom scenes in this book is where the true talent lies, they are in alot of romance books but few writers actually do them well imo, especially where the male lead says and thinks such incredibly sexy things. However I would extend them a bit, because other than the first few, later on they, while still steamy, felt a little rushed and the heat should always be well spaced and build.

love it

I loved it. picky about Mc books and this one was really good. will definitely read the rest.

gripping romantic ride

Great read fabulous characters twists that take you on an emotional journey and keep you guessing and begging for more! Have to have the next in series!

Nickel & Karmen

Everything was too instant, slow pace, no real drama or angst, and no epilogue only a HFN. There were issues within the MC club that were never resolved and there was no real brotherhood. More depth was needed for the story and the characters were boring.