Midnight Masochist

Pandora's Submissive Mass Ritual with a Priest

By: Nora Wicked

Narrated by: Nora Wicked

Length: 31 mins

Publisher's summary

Sex clubs, sadomasochism, sinful, sinful pleasure. Pandora thinks she's ready for the next level, but is she? She will soon find out. Father Henry is a handsome man of the cloth. But he has no guilt and offers no repentance for his harsh sexual actions. He thrives on them. And at midnight mass when churchgoers are praying and singing holy praises, he will have Pandora tied up in his chambers on the other side of the wall, indulging his cock into her.

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Poor vocal performance.poorly written.

The actress's voice could've been the perfect fit for erotica like this, but she comes off as try hard. Like a woman making an honest tempt to be seductive but failing. try sounding more like your reading an amusing book, or reliving a memory, and less like you're Lola bunny.

The writing isn't horrible but is obviously not polished or refined. Simply by how often the writer creates sentences that say "she one thing, but at the same time another thing" you could tell. Again it's like she is trying too hard to make you believe something. "pain burned through her legs, up her ass, and into her back, but she enjoyed every second of it" that clarification needs to be made exactly once; any more and it will appear like you are desperate for the readers to grasp that she is experiencing pleasure and pain.

Just be more natural and stop overthinking it.

Also try to snag a male actor to play the priest, the masculine feminine dynamic is particularly important in a book like this.