Master Fiction Writing

Writers are surrounded by bad advice masquerading as wisdom. In this episode, we take six of the most persistent fiction-writing myths and throw them politely but firmly in the bin. From talent and inspiration to first drafts, genre snobbery, publishing myths, and the idea that only bleak literary fiction counts as serious, this is a sharp, funny, practical reset for writers who are tired of feeling like they’re doing it wrong.

Why does tightening a draft so often feel slow, frustrating, and weirdly inconclusive? Usually because writers start at the sentence level instead of the structural one.

In this episode, Stuart shares a faster, smarter way to revise by function rather than fussing. You’ll learn the three tightening passes he uses to diagnose saggy scenes (purpose, pressure, and payoff) along with a one-hour tightening sprint you can use on your own manuscript today. He also delivers a six-part kill list of common flab patterns, including throat-clearing openings, duplicated beats, over-explained emotion, and weak transitions.

This is a practical, voice-friendly approach to revision that helps you cut what’s dragging without flattening what makes your work yours.

If your scenes keep slipping into “and then… and then… and then…”, this episode is for you. In this episode, Stuart breaks down one of the simplest ways to create stronger cause-and-effect on the page: scene turns.

You’ll learn what a turn actually is, why it matters, and four reliable types you can use to make any scene work harder. Stuart also walks you through a quick Scene Turn Audit you can use in revision, plus a mini quiz to help you test your understanding as you listen.

In this episode:

• What a scene turn is

• Why flat scenes often lack meaningful change

• Four practical scene-turn types you can use straight away

• A simple two-question audit for revising weak scenes

• A quick assignment to help you apply the tool to your own draft

If you want scenes that generate momentum instead of just filling space, this episode will help you build them!

Follow the show for more practical story-development tools, and check out the earlier causality episode for a perfect companion listen.