Lessers and Betters: A Pride and Prejudice Variation

By: Don Jacobson, A Lady

Narrated by: Barbara Rich

A devastating loss

A heroic act

A life-changing injury

Lessers & Betters: A Kitty Bennet/Richard Fitzwilliam Love Story.

Having known only a privileged life, Miss Catherine Bennet—no longer Kitty—used her one connection to secure a governess’ position. Her father’s sudden death brought about this change in circumstances and has amended her character. She's now reliable, determined, trustworthy, and much more than the pretty face her mother thought would win her a husband.

When tragedy strikes in the park—and war’s unseen wounds capture her footman—Miss Bennet sustains life-threatening injuries. Fate’s chance encounter that November day brings General Richard Fitzwilliam to her side. Having spent years fighting the Tyrant, he sees past her scars and values her compassion, steadiness of purpose, and resilience in the face of devastating obstacles.

©2018 Donald P. Jacobson (P)2018 Donald P. Jacobson

If you re-read Pride & Prejudice..this is for you

Don Jacobsen creates new and original PRIDE & PREJUDICE side stories in these two Austen-esque novellas which tell the story of the same big event of November 1815, from two different class perspectives, reminiscent of UPSTAIRS DOWNSTAIRS or DOWNTON ABBEY. For a glimpse of the author's well educated insight into the creative process of these works, don't skip the opening author's comments.

(Pay attention for delightful cross over Poldark characters....yeah🥰🥰🥰 brief mention of an Earl of Grantham and clever adaptations of corollary "It is universally accepted as true that...." comments.)

Of Fortunes Reversal: The fate of a Bennett sister, good and bad, is told; complete with a medical emergency, circa 1815 ground breaking surgery and love affair, told from the view of the upper class family.

The Maid and The Footman: In this novella, we return to the same significant events, but see it through the backstories and perspectives of the maids and footmen, including a new servant who is recently returned from a decade of frontline battle experiences and the toll they have taken on his peaceful soul.

The narrator of the audiobook is good, switching from adult to juvenile upper to working class and make to female voices in a believable way.

Integrity

This is a an excellent P&P variation, made up of two novellas previously released separately as “Of Fortunes Reversal” and “The Maid and the Footman”. While they receive brief mentions, this is not a Darcy and Elizabeth story, but it’s definitely a love story—actually two—and definitely has a happy ending.

A tragic event in a park will have General Sir Richard Fitzwilliam come to be known to Kitty Bennet, governess to the Cecil family, and two respected servants within that household, Henry Wilson and Annie Reynolds.

The lives of an admirable cast of characters are brought together—first by circumstance, then followed by friendship and love. In the process, they break the barrier between classes. It is the integrity—the moral soundness of the character of these respective individuals that truly shines in this beautiful story and makes you admire and love them. The writing is poignant and master-class, giving readers an insightful glimpse into the upstairs/downstairs ways of life in the Regency. I will be purchasing the Kindle version for my library.

The narration and performance by Barbara Rich is very good (4.5 stars). I wasn’t quite sure at first, as some intonations sounded a little AI and droning to my ear at first, but she definitely grew on me. Along with the author’s expertly written word, she was able to evoke tears at times and that is a big deal to me.

Disclaimer: I was gifted a copy of this audiobook by the author via a Facebook audiobooks group without the promise of a review, but I am very pleased to voluntarily provide one.

A Fabulous Upstairs/Dowstairs Story Pair

We're used to those historical romances that portray ladies and gentlemen finding love and living happily ever after, but what about the people who share their home and work from before the sun and into the wee hours to keep them living in comfort, good food, and gorgeous clothes? In Lessers and Betters, we are given two novellas that portray the same story, but from two different vantage points and offering two different romances from Upstairs and then from Downstairs.

In Of Fortune's Reversal, Miss Kitty Bennet and General Fitzwilliam find love under a most harrowing circumstances. However, there were two couples introduced in the story. In the second novella, The Maid and the Footman, Annie Reynolds and Henry Wilson are given their opportunity to shine along with a new and suspenseful facet to what was revealed in the earlier tale.

Of Fortune's Reversal is a Pride and Prejudice variation that tackles the 'what if' question of what happens if Darcy and Bingley don't come to Netherfield and Mr. Bennet passes away leaving his estate to his cousin and his widow and daughters nearly destitute. Each daughter steps up including the fourth daughter, Kitty who becomes a governess to the powerful Cecil family. The story opens with Kitty showing her grit when she stops a kidnapping of her charge and there are deadly consequences for her, but also a chance at romance from an unlikely source.

I thoroughly enjoyed this version of Kitty Bennet and dashing, but older General Fitzwilliam. Their romance was tender and heartwarming as was their unlikely friendship with servants, Annie and Henry.

The Maid and the Footman introduces original characters, Annie Reynolds and former soldier, Sergeant Henry Wilson. The reader can recognize where this one runs parallel to the earlier novella, but it fills in with life below stairs and a cunning suspense thread that was only hinted at in the earlier novella. A sweet romance develops between clever and competent Annie and guilt-ridden and war-ravaged Henry.

As much as I enjoyed Kitty and Richard's story, I think the follow-up with Annie and Henry was every bit as engaging and more enjoyable in some ways. Henry is starting over after the war and struggling so much with PTSD though they didn't have a name or a treatment for it back then. I loved how Annie supported him and helped him keep his dignity and, at the same time, I thought it was one of the best things about Henry that he respected Annie's acumen and contributions in working against their opponents.

I appreciated how carefully the stories were placed in historical setting and detailed out. The author brought this regency world to life in livid detail. I do love accuracy with my stories because I learn from this and because it keeps me from getting distracted from the story itself so I'm grateful when an author takes the time to get it right. However, I'm about to contradict myself somewhat. There were times when the historical details and 'teaching points' of the broader world around the story or addressing of social issues (as worthy as these topics were) took over the focus. I enjoy history so this didn't bother me over much, but it did distract enough to mention.

Fun fact, both novellas offer several famous literary Easter eggs scattered throughout. It was fun coming across them. I particularly loved coming across mention of Richard Sharpe, Dr. Maturin, and Jeremy Poldark, to name a few. Also, for those who enjoy The Bennet Wardrobe series, this too got more than a passing nod though its not a crossover tale.

Barbara Rich was a first time narrator for me. She has a fantastic storytelling voice with lots of versatility. She handled a large cast of characters, accents, genders, pacing, and tone so well that I found myself immersed in the story and reluctant to pause when I needed to stop. I will definitely be looking for her work from now on.

All in all, I thought these were a pair of heartwarming and fabulous stories. I fell in love with the characters and would love to see further stories in this world particularly after the little loose threads left in both epilogues. Austen lovers should definitely pick this up, but I think sweet historical romance fans would enjoy these, as well.

Amazing! Brilliant! Different!

Don Jacobson have done it again!! A wonderful story, which shows another twist to Kitty and Colonel Fitzwilliam’s story seen from both upstairs and downstairs persons. In the first part of the story we follow Kitty from her employ in Cecil House and until her wedding. In the second story, we hear the same story, but seen from Annie Reynolds, a maid and Sergeant Henry, a footman ‘a point of view. This gives the listener and reader a deeper understanding of not only the Wardrobe universe, but also this alternative universe, while also telling the story from two different sides of positions of the regency world. What also struck me was the other well known characters of Maturin from Master and Commander, Jeremy Poldark from the series and book Poldark and lastly John Watson from Sherlock Holmes series, which was a creative struck of genius.
I couldn’t put the book down! I can’t wait for more from Don Jacobson’s creative desk.

The performance by Barbara made the Cecil family come alive as I listened to the story, and also gave me an idea how Kitty, Darcy, Colonel Fitzwilliam, Henry, Annie and many other beloved characters would sound. I especially have to congratulate Barbara for her singing as Henry during his proposal to Annie Reynolds, which was so sweet and romantic, and made this listener tear up.

Awful

The narrator is just awful, she takes away from the story so much that I couldn't finish the book.