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Large and In Charge

Narrated by: Veronica Heart
Length: 32 mins
Categories: Romance, Suspense
2.5 out of 5 stars (10 ratings)
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This Story Is Seductive

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The world is a seriously strange place. When Lunessa Archer's husband is found dead by his own hand at his Navy camp in Japan, things get even more so. Luna decided to investigate with one of her dead husband's friends named Jonathan Abraham. What they find along the way is truly horrific, but they also find love again. But will the same fate that met Luna's first love intervene?

©2015 Michael Henry van der Voort (P)2015 Michael Henry van der Voort

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As much as I wanted to like this one, I just didn't.
Luna loses one husband only to give birth the same day she finds out.
Then she falls in love with one of the men who gave her the news.
Who also tells her that her husband was murdered. And 5 yrs go by of them trying to figure out who did it, and how to get them for it.

I don’t know I just didn't connect with the story at all I didn't really like the narration of this one, she drags her words out to much. I have liked other books narrated by her but this one isn't one of them.

*Given for an Honest Review.*
*You don't have to like my review but its 100% my opinion, and I am allowed to have it.*

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way to much story for 45 min audiobook

Could be a good book if rewritten.I would like to read this story again if the author reworks it to a shorter plot or rewrite it with the detail it deserves

1. very poor choice of narrator for this book. Ms. Hart is female and sounds like she is straining to speak in a deep male voice for every character.

2. trying to tell a complicated story that spans years in 45 min doesn't work. many parts are chopped off just to skip to another event. many parts are ridiculously simplified. there is a lot of tragedy and little to no romance in this book as it is currently written. but it could be so much better.

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Veronica Heart’s narrative sounds like she is asking a question at the end of every sentence. I found it very distracting.

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Terrible!

I wish I could have given the book negative stars. The performance was horrible and the story was lack luster and boring. In other words it was stupid and the audio was terrible.

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Nice little listen!

I enjoyed listening to this book its a nice little quick story. It always amazes me how much you can tell in a 33 min. story. Hope you enjoy it as well!