Jaquan: Child of the Neanderthals

By: Wendell Sweet

Narrated by: Virtual Voice

Her mother... Jaquan couldn't find her mother. The frantic searching only intensified the growing terror. The air filled with the stench of blood and the chilling metallic tang of death. The Cro-Magnons, with their superior weaponry and seemingly ruthless efficiency, moved like a tide of destruction, their spears flashing in the darkness. They were taller, leaner, and faster. Their weapons were more advanced; longer spears, sharper flint blades – weapons that seemed designed for efficient killing. The Neanderthals, while possessing immense strength, struggled against the Cro-Magnons' relentless assault and superior strategy. Their close-quarters fighting style, which had served them so well for generations, was overwhelmed by the range and precision of the Cro-Magnon spears.

The sounds of the attack were horrifying – the sickening thud of bodies hitting the cave floor, the sharp crack of bone, the choked gasps for air, the desperate cries for help. Jaquan pressed herself against the cold cave wall, her small body trembling violently. She watched, helpless and terrified, as her world crumbled around her.

The fight was short, brutal, and utterly one-sided. Within minutes, the struggle ceased. The cave, moments ago alive with the sounds of fighting and fear, fell silent, an unnatural stillness settling over the scene. Only the crackling of the dying fire and Jaquan’s ragged breathing disturbed the heavy silence. The smell of blood hung thick in the air, a suffocating blanket that clung to her nostrils and choked her lungs...

A young Neanderthal girl is orphaned in a brutal attack and left to survive on her own. This is her story of how she survived, set on the European continent 45,000 years ago...

AI created this book Don’t waste your time.

No. This book is obviously written by AI, and not even proofed or maybe not even read by the person stated as author. The 9 year old Neanderthal character had a baby in the first half of the book, then suddenly became a “he” after that. It’s the same “ideas” over and over and over, without any details and without saying much. It’s as though someone was told they needed to write a 50 page paper with only 2 pages worth of information, so they went on and on and on. No character development for the one character, so no reader engagement. However I was surprised how I enjoyed the virtual voice.