Jaded

A Lesbian Romance

De: Reba Bale

Narrado por: Virtual Voice

They say love can find you anywhere, but this was the last place they expected to find each other!

Lauren has been initiating new submissives at Club Surrender for many years, but lately it’s all become…boring. She’s jaded, ready to hang up her paddle and spend some time at home. Until she sees the new bartender…

Kristina has always longed to explore her secret fantasies, but now that she’s working at the nation’s premier women only "light BDSM" club, she can see what it’s really like to submit to someone. When her boss matches her with Mistress Lauren for her first-ever play session, she can’t say no. There’s something about the sexy and dominant older woman that makes her want to spend time with her. Maybe forever.

When a spanking turns into much, much more these two women are forced to admit that sometimes love at first sight actually happens in real life. But will it last?

Jaded is book one in the Surrender Club instalove lesbian romance series. Each book is a fun and steamy WLW standalone with matchmaking dommes, loving sapphic relationships, and a sweet happily ever after.

Hot, Spice, and a little bit of Nice

Even though it didn’t have actually narrators I enjoyed listening to this book. I think I actually loved it a lot more this way. Of course I wouldn’t say no to adding narrators but if more short novellas are done like this I will be listening to so many more!

The story was good but could be better.

I am not crazy about AI narrators though this one is better than many I have heard. There is a great deal of potential here for a full length book. Ms. Bale should consider fleshing this story out more. Create full characters with a history and more depth. I would love to read this again as a full length book.

Great first time BDSM

This short clip was good and really fun. The virtual voice is just okay and served it's purpose.

Short on details

I know this is basically a little novella, but I definitely wanted more detail between what each character was feeling more than “I love you”.

This is bad writing

Erotica is good. Kink is too. This comes across as fantasy written by someone who’s never actually had sex with a woman. The computer voice narration takes it from cringey to full on creepy. Skip this one.

My general attitude is that I won’t spend money on AI narration, but I’ll listen for free. I might discover a new author or a book I’d like to buy in another format. This one was not worth even the time I spent on it. I now need to go find a good listen to immerse myself in so my brain doesn’t fixate and give me nightmares.