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Publisher's Summary

Even a demigoddess must have a weakness.

On the run from the coven she used to call home, Harley Merlin knows that Katherine’s power and influence are spreading like a poison. And she has no doubt that Katherine will follow through with her promise to torture and kill her friends, one by one.

Then Harley discovers that the key to her enemy’s undoing might be hiding in a familiar place - her parents' grimoire. With Finch, Wade, and Garrett by her side, Harley vows to steal Hester and Hiram’s final gift.

Liar. Rebel. Jail breaker. Why not add "thief" to the list?

Meanwhile, Jacob senses trouble brewing in the San Diego Coven, with their friends imprisoned and Levi’s thirst for power spiraling out of control. Amid the chaos, the magical detector is on the verge of completion, and Jacob meets a human girl who makes his heart race. But Katherine has plans for him. Oh yes, does she have plans....

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©2019 Bella Forrest (P)2019 Bella Forrest

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Really enjoyed this series when I first started it

It just keeps going on and on and on! I want to get to the END! It's infuriating that Catherine continues to gain the upper hand over and over and over and over! It's annoyingly disappointing!

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More Filler Than Plot Progression

I’ve enjoyed these books and the characters have been well written. However, this book did not seem necessary in the whole scheme. There was a lot of unnecessary exposition and too many pointless scenes.

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Dual Perspectives

Not sure if I really like that the chapters change from Harley’s point of view to Jacob’s. I can understand why, but it’s not the same. The book is called “Harley Merlin.” So, it should stick to her. Plus, I don’t care about Jacobs love life or that he’s looking at boobs.

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Loved this book

I didn't feel like I was force listening to this book. It flowed rymthmictly for me. There were some surprises I didn't see coming but enjoyed nevertheless.

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Harley sucks.

Start off by saying I love these books and can’t wait to get to the ending. But oh my god... Harley Merlin is THE worst protagonist I’ve ever seen. She’s written horribly. Everyone else is much more interesting and I find myself rooting for the villains anytime Harley is around. She just gets powers. She didn’t earn them or work hard for them. She just gets them. Also, anybody who disagrees with her is automatically a villain. And everybody just agrees with her. Even the smart and relatable characters get dumbed down just to satisfy her needs. She’s a horribly written protagonist. Also the author clearly doesn’t know how to write strong woman without it seeming forced. The narrator does such a phenomenal job that I can look past a lot besides Harley.

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Just gets better and better......

Love these books. The details and story line are so detailed and heartbreaking but awesome at the time.

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Aggravation at every turn

Poor plot progression, unexplainable plot twists for the sake of drawing out a 5 book series to 9 books. Will not waste more credits on the last 2 books. I’ve had it with this one. Emma Jean is Katherine? It’s not even a clever twist, it’s just stupid. All to draw out the final confrontations.

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Very disappointed

Each book you hope the characters will grow and mature and do things differently but they do not and they keep failing . The villain continues to get stronger and winning. I feel like the end will be a weak win and no realistic


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  • 09-12-19

Love Harley Merlin

This entire series has been amazing, I’m so glad they’re putting the next books of the series on audible so quickly!!!

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Love this series!

I love this series so much and I hope Katherine gets it whats coming for her soon.

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  • Annie
  • 05-12-20

Too drawn out!

I initially enjoyed the first few books but the story is far too long and drawn out with lots of repetitive 'dialogue'. I almost reached the point where I wanted to skip chapters just to get to the end. I will persevere to hear the final outcome but won't bother listening to any more. The narrator is outstanding. She is an excellent actress.

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  • Kindle Customer Brenda Powell
  • 01-22-20

Enjoyable magic.

Very gripping and enjoyable. Well written and good characters. Hard to put down. I would recommend this series.

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  • Mrs. C. J. Armstrong
  • 10-02-19

brilliant gripping book well read

brilliant gripping book well read. love the full series highly recommend to all. thank you

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  • lymara charles
  • 09-22-19

I was right lol

Love it and I knew she was too nice from the beginning always had a feeling something was off about her

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  • Demino
  • 12-30-20

Great

I love these books, the story is gripping and the characters are really lovable, even Finch!
The narrator is brilliant, it's amazing how she keeps up with all the voices.

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  • karen grice
  • 10-30-20

amazing

Best book series since harry potter books and the hunger games. hope they make the series has a film

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  • Louisa Hylton
  • 08-14-20

great books.

love this series. easy listening.looking forward to the next one. would recommend to anyone that if into fiction

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  • Stephi
  • 05-31-20

Simply gripping

This is a great book! Simple as that! I listen to it while decorating and the time flew!

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  • Kevin Phelan
  • 05-21-20

A rollercoaster

This book had many dull slow moments, which at times felt super unbelievable. The ending though was SUPER strong and there were a handful of gripping moments. One of the weakest ones thus far but worth getting to the end for the climax!

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  • kylie myers
  • 09-29-19

fantastic

Beautifully read. Absolutely loving this series, a bit disappointed that the next book isnt available yet