Gym Crush

Catalina's Adventures in California, Book 1

By: Paris Rivera

Narrated by: Kelly Morgan

Length: 41 mins

Publisher's summary

"How is the shower?" Catalina called out, her voice a little broken with the desire that she was struggling to conceal.

"Oh, it’s lovely!" the girl called out.

Catalina lifted one hand to the tight black top she was wearing and moved it strongly against her left breast. Mmmm, that felt so good! She was watching Jessie like a hawk now as the blonde girl appeared to wash her hands with the soap and then place it back in the soap-dish. It was hard to be sure, but Jessie now seemed to have moved her hands to her own belly - and perhaps below - and was pushing her pert backwards and forwards in little dance-style moves, apparently rubbing up against her own hands. Oh gosh, that was just too sexy! Catalina reached up to massage her other breast through the tight material of her T-shirt and then moved the other hand down to her own belly and inside her low-cut white shorts.

She still had not seen the girl’s naked body, but it appeared that her young visitor – without even fully revealing herself – was putting on a little show for Catalina’s benefit. The older woman reached inside the blue panties that were still just visible at the top of her shorts...

©2014 Paris Rivera (P)2014 Paris Rivera

What a workout

This is a very delicious little story. They give each other a great workout outside the gym. You’ll need a shower after listening to this one 😉

Higher level of the Genre

Paris Rivera does a good job of raising the level of the story line of erotic stories. It's not great literature by any means but does a better job connecting the story's various sex scenes than do most of the works of this genre.

Very sexy!

Paris is an awesome fantasy writer:) I really enjoyed the narrator everything was right on point 💕💕

Hot!

Hot, fast, fun listen! Loved the story, narration and all the hotness involved!!! Highly recommend it

Hot

A little strange but overall a well written and performed pwp. I could listen to Kelly Morgan reading the phone book though.

Short. Sweet. Sexy.

I loved the story. One of my favorite settings for erotic stories is the gym. This story was more about picking up someone at the gym. There was an awesome teaser shower scene too.

The narration wasn't all that great. The narrator read too fast and the sound effects drowned out the reading.

Well written, well produced.

The story was well undertaken, well written. The erotic element of the book didn't overpower the storyline. ite was well balanced.

Delightful!

I love Catalina and Jesse, from the description of both women I can safely say I'm smitten. It's definitely time for me to join the gym and get lucky like Catalina!

Hot and steamy

Disclaimer: I was given this free review copy audiobook at my request and have voluntarily left this review. A beautifully written, short, hot and steamy erotica. The characters are bold, sexy and beautiful, the scenes written are filled with hot visuals. Although briefly mentioned, Paris hinted at the depth of the characters, their subtle and suggestive actions making the characters interesting and fun to meet. Strongly recommend this for a fun and steamy story. Narration by Kelly Morgan is absolutely brilliant. Her pacing is just right, the sound effects are very wonderfully done and she really brought this book to its full glory.