Gym Crush

By: Paris Rivera

Narrated by: Kelly Morgan

Length: 41 mins

Publisher's Summary

"How is the shower?" Catalina called out, her voice a little broken with the desire that she was struggling to conceal.

"Oh, it’s lovely!" the girl called out.

Catalina lifted one hand to the tight black top she was wearing and moved it strongly against her left breast. Mmmm, that felt so good! She was watching Jessie like a hawk now as the blonde girl appeared to wash her hands with the soap and then place it back in the soap-dish. It was hard to be sure, but Jessie now seemed to have moved her hands to her own belly - and perhaps below - and was pushing her pert backwards and forwards in little dance-style moves, apparently rubbing up against her own hands. Oh gosh, that was just too sexy! Catalina reached up to massage her other breast through the tight material of her T-shirt and then moved the other hand down to her own belly and inside her low-cut white shorts.

She still had not seen the girl’s naked body, but it appeared that her young visitor – without even fully revealing herself – was putting on a little show for Catalina’s benefit. The older woman reached inside the blue panties that were still just visible at the top of her shorts...

©2014 Paris Rivera (P)2014 Paris Rivera

Higher level of the Genre

Paris Rivera does a good job of raising the level of the story line of erotic stories. It's not great literature by any means but does a better job connecting the story's various sex scenes than do most of the works of this genre.

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Very sexy!

Paris is an awesome fantasy writer:) I really enjoyed the narrator everything was right on point 💕💕

Well written, well produced.

The story was well undertaken, well written. The erotic element of the book didn't overpower the storyline. ite was well balanced.

Delightful!

I love Catalina and Jesse, from the description of both women I can safely say I'm smitten. It's definitely time for me to join the gym and get lucky like Catalina!

Short. Sweet. Sexy.

I loved the story. One of my favorite settings for erotic stories is the gym. This story was more about picking up someone at the gym. There was an awesome teaser shower scene too.

The narration wasn't all that great. The narrator read too fast and the sound effects drowned out the reading.

That was just too sexy.

Catalina meets a young woman in the gym, even though I thought they would end up testing the gym shower or something similar, they went to Catalina's house and there the teasing begins.
Paris succeeds again in setting a scene where all her readers can relate to and can image being part of.
This is a hot older/younger women story that begins with small flirtatious actions and ends in fireworks and a really sexy scene.
the narrator is well chosen, she has a soft voice and sets the tension with her whispers.
I'm looking forward to book 2 in the series.

Hotter and hotter

Very well written by Paris. Gets the teasing going. Has a great ending and you will be wanting more as there is a deeper story there.