Fire Horse

Polo, Book 1

By: Mickie B. Ashling

Narrated by: Max Lehnen

Length: 7 hrs and 55 mins

Publisher's Summary

Preston Fawkes is 10 the first time he meets 15-year-old Konrad Schnell at the San Antonio Polo Club. Captivated by the mystique surrounding the sport of kings, Pres vows to learn the game at the hands of his newly acquired friend and mentor. The hero worship soon grows into something deeper, but the friends are separated when Preston goes off to boarding school in England.

The relationship that follows is riddled with challenges: their age gap, physical distance, and parental pressure taking precedence over feelings yet to be explored. Although their bond goes deep, they deal with the reality of their situation differently: Preston is open and fearless while Konrad is reticent and all too aware of the social implications of making a public stand.

Their paths intersect and twine, binding them as tightly as a cowboy's lasso, but fate may alter their plans. How will love overcome the divots in the turf as they gallop toward the future - one where obstacles no longer stand in their way?

©2013 Mickie B Ashling (P)2015 Dreamspinner Press

Fire Horse by Mickie B Ashling

I've been listening to this book over the last couple of days and I am loving it.
I can't compare the audio edition of Fire Horse to the print version because each has it's own special recommendations. I love the printed word but the audio gives me an insight which I don't get when reading. I know that I am being guided by the narrator's voice but this is a trip that I am happy to go on. I only buy the audio version after I have read and enjoyed the ebook but I love the new vision that I get of the story when I listen to it.
It did take me a little while to accept the narrator's voice but, once this was done, I was happy to go on the journey with him.
This story - both in ebook and in audio - is highly recommended.

Max Lehnen did a fine job but the story is weak

Any additional comments?

This book starts with Preston as an injured Polo player being told he should never play again and he’s lucky to be alive. We know he has 2 ex-wives and 2 children, and that Kon is NOT in his life, currently. (This should give you an idea of where things are headed…) Then we get to the flashbacks which take up the bulk of the book.

As a boy of ten Preston meets Konrad, a boy of 15, for the first time and learns from him what it means to be a Polo player. He acts as his groom and Kon mentors him in the sport.

Preston’s hero worship of Kon changes on the night he realizes that Kon is gay and that the feelings in his gut may be more than just friendship. Kon, as he should, rebuffs the now 13 year old’s advances, and puts him off because he’s too young and the two are about to be separated by Kon’s joining the American Polo team and Preston’s going overseas to study.

Preston meets Ned at Eaton. Ned shows Preston how to be properly English and Preston gives Ned Polo lessons. After a while, Ned then becomes Preston’s tutor in gay sex as well as his close friend.

Preston and Ned don’t become boyfriends though, because Preston is saving that for Kon, whom he stays in touch with and occasionally meets.

Finally, when Preston is 17 he and Kon spend a chunk of time together and move their relationship forward, becoming lovers and long-distance boyfriends.

Here is where things go horribly wrong. Their relationship is discovered and Kon is forced to join the military and …. Well if I tell you it’s a big spoiler. Needless to say what happens next keeps Kon and Pres apart until the end of the story and closer to the end of their lives.

**
I really, really wanted to like this. I loved the idea. The pre-eighteen year old sex did not bother me – that’s reality for a lot of people and I thought it was mostly handled well.

What bothered me: Kon never really seemed to love Pres as much as Pres loved him. Kon seemed to LUST for Preston, but not love him. Preston was a jerk, and hard to like, so I don’t blame Kon. As an adult, Pres only gets worse.

The plot twists were far too many and too hard to believe. At times it was like a soap opera in the way that the lovers were kept from one another – for YEARS. If we have that much angst I need a huge batch of happy to make up for it and the reunion at the end did NOT make up for all the unhappiness. After all the torment we see our MCs through, they get about one paragraph of happy ending and the “celibacy issue”… I just didn’t buy it at all.


I did not like the on-page sex with people not the MC. That, more than the age thing, did really bother me.

I thought the writing was ok, but I didn’t feel a lot of authenticity from the characters. Preston’s dad was practically bi-polar (smacking Preston around then giving him a new pony.) Preston’s step-dad just going out and renting his 16 year old son porn seemed nuts. Preston’s mom even marrying Preston’s dad didn’t make much sense. Ned – putting up with Preston’s crap for so long.

Audiobook
Max Lehnen is hit or miss for me. I have heard him do some nice narrations, and I have heard him butcher some. In this case he had some tall orders. He had to do a wide range of ages, including aging the MCs from 10 to adult. He had several accents to do, Texan, British, and Preston’s odd British/Texas blend. I thought for the most part he did a great job handling such a demanding narration, though some of his accents were definitely better than others.

I give Max Lehnen 4 of stars and the story 1 of 5 stars which should give this an average of 2.5 stars – but I can’t really go that high. So 2 of 5 stars for the audiobook.