The Visitor Arrives

Four Friendly MMF Menage Tales, Visitor 1 - 4

By: K.D. West

Narrated by: Milo Churchcutt

Length: 2 hrs and 34 mins

Publisher's summary

It's the world's oldest story: a girl, her fireman, and her other fireman.

When Lea heads off to Atlanta for a job interview, all she's thinking about is the work. Well, and Sean, her best friend's brother. Sean, the tall, muscular firefighter with the gentle Southern drawl and the wicked smile - whose couch she's going to be sleeping on.

Well, actually, whose couch she hopes very much she won't be sleeping on. But it turns out that Andy, Sean's roommate, is another, equally hot Southern firefighter, and so when a visitor - or perhaps two - joins Lea on that couch, it sparks a series of events that none of them could possibly have foreseen.

But that, none of them regrets. Not even a little bit.

This collection contains the first four installments in The Visitor Saga: The Visitor, The Visitor Comes Home, The Visitor Comes Again, The Visitor Goes to Work.

Note: This audiobook contains explicit language and scenes of sexuality between consenting adults including MF, MMF, and menage a trois.

©2014 Stillpoint Digital Press (P)2014 Stillpoint Digital Press

Theaters and Firefighters and Planes! Oh My!

Narration - Milo Churchcutt - I didn't really care for the narration. At times he read really fast but then during her erotic musings or the sex scenes, he read slowly and sounded kinda skeezy. There was also a point where you could hear him clunking around at his desk without narration, so I'm assuming that was supposed to be edited out. It only lasted about 3 seconds.

I'm thinking this would be a more enjoyable read vs. listen.

The story (as the title suggests) is four short stories with a mmf menage, so if that's not your thing...turn around, go the other way, nothing to see here.

For the rest of us? Its a hot little story, but I did hope to have a little more fun with her gift from Kristen! (That must come in installment #5)
But, I digress...Lea comes to Atlanta for a job interview and "books" the couch at Sean's apartment. Sean is her best friends brother and she's had the hots for him for as long as she's known him! But low and behold, Sean has a roommate - Andy (another hot firefighter). Ah...a girl can dream.

You just have to read it to find out how that all pans out. The sex is hot, so if that's what you're looking for, you'll enjoy these quick little reads. There is some mm action, so if that's not your thing - you've been warned.

I received this audiobook free of charge in exchange for an unbiased review.

The Visitor Arrives

I really liked this book!I found the narrator,Milo Churchcuff, to be a bit dry.I believe a female narrator may have been better.
I was given this book free for an honest review

not much of a story line

Any additional comments?

I didn't really care for this book. It didn't have much of a story line to it. Just sex.

I was gifted this book in exchange for a honest review.

Short and Steamy

I received this audio book for free from Audio blast in exchange for an honest review.

This is a short steamy little read, although the narration sounded a little bit like a dirty old man giving a heavy breathing telephone call ! 

You would think a little MFM reading would having you running to the nearest cold shower to cool down and change panties, unfortunately this didn't, some of the scenes were quite steamy, but narration put me off completely.

The only way I can describe it is if you got Will Patton to whisper a whole book in a very camp accent! 

New job in a new city.......Check
Best friends brother.........Check
Stay at his house..............Check
Hot friend staying with him....Check
Achy thighs......Check
Throbbing members......Check
Firemen..........Check 

I would certainly read as opposed to listen as the 4 stories weren't bad.

3☆

very good

Loved it !! this story. the narrator is so fantastic it's like your really there!! After listening to this story,. I totally enjoyed reading this book. It’s well written and the characters were uniquely fantastic. I would suggest this book to my friends that like this sort of genera. this was a good book. The narration was great.

Miles was Amazing

The narrator was Amazing. I loved the transitions, tone of voice, and flow of the book.

Sensual, Tantalizing & Thrilling

All 4 short stories were sexually exciting. I really enjoyed the connection between Lea and her " boy toys." The sex scenes were steamy and stimulating. I also appreciated how the scenes were vividly described. I really enjoyed listening to this audiobook. I truly believe that this audiobook would turn into an awesome video for adults.

HORRIBLE NARRATOR!

Couldn't finish it because of the narrator! Oh my gosh, he's not into it and sounds utterly ridiculous! I'm sorry but no. Skip this! Save your credit!

Narration Was Good - But 'Book' Raunchy- Ick!

I should've taken note at the title & length of the book, but I did not. I didn't even make it through the two hours and 30 minutes this short story (set of four.)

There was no real plot to hold the "mature" scenes together. It was raunchy and frivolous, in my opinion and I am, by no means, a prude.

Perhaps if the author took a little bit more time in character development and a plot, there would be a wider listening base. However, for me this was a total turn off.

I was given a copy of this book in exchange for my thoughts, opinions & this review. This is the first book I've not completed since becoming a reviewer and I am embarrassed to have it among my reviews, but I committed to it.

Note: Explicit sex & strong language

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worst narration ever

I couldn't even make it past the first 3 minutes of this book The narration is just god-awful the story might be good but the narration is just terrible