Dungeon Master

By: Eric Vall

Narrated by: Joshua Story

Length: 13 hrs and 10 mins

Publisher's summary

What would you do if you were the most powerful dungeon deity in the world and the bindings keeping you trapped within your dungeon were broken? Would you escape? Would you acquire a party of beautiful female minions? Would you use your new minions to conquer other dungeon deities, consume their magic, and grow even more powerful? Would you take over the world? Would you then take over the heavens and destroy the gods?

Yes, you would do all of the above.

©2018 Eric Vall (P)2019 Eric Vall

loved the book

amazing loved to story and character. the narrator did a wonderful job as well. I can't wait for the next book in the series!

Unique

Unique take on dungeon cores and I have to say I loved the varied characters. I can't wait to see more of "Master's" background revealed.

Really Enjoyable

So far I can say everything has been quite enjoyable from this author and narrator. This book made me want to keep listening. The story had the right amounts of everything in it too keep it captivating and the narration of it was done fairly well.

lighthalk

enjoy the books so far. It can get a little slow depending on your taste, the main character you have to understand is a god now in a human Avatar and is trying to help his minions increase in their skill

Awesome.

Joshua did an amazing job and I was honestly surprised mostly because I started Eric's books with succubus lord so I was skeptical about not having a female voice actress. but like I said Joshua Blew it out of the park.

COULD'VE BEEN BETTER

struggled to finish it .not a fan of the narration voices .All same with just different levels of pitch.

its just... everyone in the world is kind of dumb

occasionally a struggle to continue. the characters are pretty rough and one dimensional, mc is pretty hard to support, and, as the title of my review states, everyone comes across as childishly stupid. I hope the next ones are better, because it's a neat concept and Josh Story does a pretty good job of getting into the MC's character. hopefully we see some positive character development as well.

struggled to finish

This story didn't pull me in. It was an interesting concept but poorly executed. The voice over actors didn't help.

No tention at all

As the title says really. After it's clear he's not gonna kill the girls, or replace one with a meat puppet, the tention in the book drops to zero fast. It becomes clear rapidly that nothing is really a match for him, not even other gods(diatys). The only reason the book isn't half as long is because the MC "allows" the gods of other dungeons to do their thing so he can "train" the girls.

The MCs morals are unclear as well. They kinda flip flop through the entire book. Going between caring about a "tragic" (predictable) backstory, and torchering and God, and a stupid dude. The reasoning for each action hits different spectrums each time he considers them. Not to mention he's a self-proclaimed "underdark" God. Sounds like a bad guy right? He certainly acts like it at times. Then you find out he was cast from the heavens because had sex with a mortal. One he absolutely loved. Who's bad? Who's good? Is there a middle ground? I don't know, it's hard to tell.

Ps. The voice actor is fine, but the voice they chose for the MC is.. well there's something about it that makes you subtlety not like the MC. Every other voice is fine, and some are genuinely heartwarming, like Carmony's. I recommend you listen to the preview before buying.

meh

MC is very bipolar, he's also very badly written. girls are bit one dimensional, but I don't really care about that. If only the MC was anything to brag about it would have been ok I guess