Chosen: Eggtopia

A Tentacle Monster Short Story

De: Ima Cupcake

Narrado por: Virtual Voice

Adult Tentacle Monster Erotic Short Story 18+

Jadara accepts a job as an incubation worker on the planet Hatasia. The tentacled Gritz monsters on the planet have become adept at incubating eggs and raising younglings for use throughout the galaxy. Jadara needs the job to help her family on her home planet Ceresia, which is dying.

When she meets General Tza after her first successful incubation procedure, she is introduced into the special Pleasure Suites of Eggtopia. What started out as a simple job incubating eggs is turning into something she didn't anticipate. Jadara will be trained as a pleasure worker, especially for the general's use, if she agrees to the Hatasian's demands.

Storyline Potential

Once again another storyline with great potential that this author should come back to and flush out. There is too much of a story here for how short this novella is. The story ends right where it should be beginning. Also, the virtual voice really does the story wrong. Having a human read it (once it's fully written) would be for the best.

open ending

good story, but oddly feels unfinished. I became more interested for the rest of the story about her and General Tza. Like do he fall in love with her, do they have mix breeding since he dnt lay eggs...