Billionaire Daddy Pop

By: B Prince

Narrated by: Kelly Morgan

Length: 33 mins

Publisher's summary

Tristan

"All I desire from her is the taste of her lips and her dangerous curves. I can't keep my eyes off her huge tits; she must be a pure and untouched, I can tell from the way her titties bounced and swayed. I want her from the bed to the floor, every which way possible!"

A lot can happen in two days! Untouched, inexperienced curvy Sasha has a deep dark fantasy which she cannot reveal because her best friend wants the same billionaire she desires! His name, Tristan. How could she possibly compete with her daredevil best friend Lisa who lets her corset drop to the floor in the presence of Older experienced genius billionaire rocker, Tristan.

She did not believe he would be remotely interested in her, but when her secret slipped out that she would like to try BDSM, all bets are off. She may just have unearthed a pandora's box...but can she deal with possibly having her fantasy come true....

What happens next could not have been planned....

This is a sexy steamy short. Perfect for an amazing mid-day listen.

Be prepared this is a steamy erotic short for mature audiences only. 18 +

©2016 B Prince (P)2017 B Prince

Disappointed

Good story but way to short. Just as it started to get good the book was over

hard pass! terrible writing, possibly fanfic^2

Ok so I think this is just a thinly veiled fifty shades fanfic (so... bad fanfic rewrite of a bad fanfic rewrite)??? The language is poor, the sexy stuff isn't sexy, he's a billionaire for no reason, she's a virgin, there's unnecessary shaming of other women, and there's a secret red room with kink paraphernalia.
So... yeah, that's the only reason I can think of that this would have been written, published, recorded, and released as audio.

The writing is sooooo bad!
From the supposedly erotic (but actually just embarrassing) parts:
Very first paragraph, his internal monologue: "I can't keep my eyes off her huge t*ts. ( 🙅🏻‍♀️ ) She must be pure and untouched. I can tell by the way her titties bounced and swayed" 🤦🏻‍♀️🤷🏻‍♀️ (TBH I almost quit right there. I probably should've, but I kept going, so now I've got this whole story to dunk on)
"his massive, sp*nk filled m*mb*r" 😬🤮
Spoken out loud, by the girl whose first O was the night before: "oh my God, you're hitting my spot!" 🤣

For some reason this 30 minute story involves a significant amount of useless description/filler? Like I think the author meant for it to flesh out the characters or something? But it definitely didn't. It was just confusing. Maybe it's a parallel with fsog the didn't get cut? Anyways, it's also not written well.

I could keep going but I shouldn't spend more time writing this review than it took to listen to the audio, so
TL;DR - no part of this is good, hard pass (unless you just want to hate-listen?)
Oh and the narrator was fine? Given how little she had to work with, I don't feel it's fair to review her based on this.