Teardrops of Lake Tawakoni

A Texas Thriller of Murder and Betrayal

De: Loretta Allseitz, David Allseitz

Narrado por: Jess Wright

When dusk settles over Lake Tawakoni, the water’s mirrored calm hides a darkness no amount of small-town charm can soothe. For Detective Loretta Smitty and her husband, Detective David Smitty, life in sleepy Quinlan, Texas, was meant to be a refuge. But the pristine shoreline soon becomes a grim crime scene: a fisherman hauls up a bloated body, its chest carved with a single, chilling symbol—a teardrop.

As bodies mount, each marked by the same ritual scar, the Smittys race against time to navigate the town’s hidden depths. Meth addiction has become a silent epidemic in this lakeside community, and rumors of a vicious vigilante who stalks dealers and addicts alike send whispers of fear through church bake sales and barbecue pits. With every murder, the killer’s message grows more brazen—and more personal.

Haunted by grief and driven by justice, Sheriff Tom Willis and his devoted wife, Martha, stand at the heart of Quinlan’s social fabric. But when evidence links the velvet-voiced sheriff’s wife to the grisly crimes—and an isolated cabin by the water reveals secret journals, hit lists, and photographs—detective work collides with betrayal. Loyalties shatter as Loretta and David confront a conspiracy that implicates the very people sworn to protect them.

©2025 Loretta Allseitz (P)2025 Loretta Allseitz

Great narrator.

I loved the story and the narrator was great. I also liked that is was short story.

Great short story!

It's a short read, but the author was able to mold a story to a satisfying and surprising conclusion and reveal some interesting characters. Great narration!

Short Thriller

Great narration from Jess Wright!

Short serial killer mystery. A little repetitive with the writing. Interesting motivations.

Excellent narration of Texas mystery

First, I must say that the narrator did a marvelous job bringing life to this story of death. Her general narration pulled me into the story, and her individual character voices were distinct and believable.

Unfortunately, the story itself is weak with choppy, short scenes that are repetitive and sometimes contradictory. The investigations into the murders never dig into details, the timelines do not always align from section to section, and the characters could use more depth. Despite these story shortcomingings, the narrator kept my interest, and I listened all the way to the story's conclusion.