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Step inside a new reality...a virtual reality

A reality that could change Michael forever!

Archaic Venture, a brand new virtual reality video game, is hot off the press, and it is selling like hotcakes. However, the creator of the game, Soto Akiyama, has thrown in a twist. The game will no longer function correctly until someone defeats the evil spirit plaguing the lands of Archaic Venture. Along with returning Archaic Venture to normal, there is a cash prize that goes with it.

For Michael Maddox, a 16-year-old who suffers from cerebral palsy and a dysfunctional home life, this game, and that money, could turn his entire life around.

Come, join the adventure of a boy who knew he would never amount to much as he discovers just how much he is worth.

©2018 Henry D. Milton (P)2018 Henry D. Milton

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Middle of the road tale with weak narration

The narrator, Milton, sounds like Brad Garrett who just smoke five cartons of cigarettes and drank five bottles of whiskey and not in an endearing way. He speaks so slowly that I guess a benefit is that you have no issue understanding him, and that he enunciates very clearly due to his rhythm. He seems to struggle to do various voices. One voice seems to just be a little deeper than the other. No real accents exist that are discernable, nor is any real emotion is added into this storytelling. He lost me when the hobbit NPC sounded like an orc or ogre. There was no attempt to even sound like a tiny humanoid. Milton almost seems to read the story one sentence at a time. He really takes away from the actual tale, and for me a mediocre narrator can drag down a decent story. This makes it really hard for me to tell how good the story itself is, and the addition of sound effects and music DETRACTS from the narration rather than adding to it. For example, He talks about a crowd going crazy, then you hear applause, and then he picks up the narration again. It is like he waits for the clapping to die down. There are also bits of music added in at various places, usually at the start of a chapter or the end. The music starts, then stops, and there is a pause before the narration picks up again. It just starts and ends and serves no purpose other than to act as filler. Then there are parts where an annoying noise repeats over and over after the bar fight for no discernable reason. Additionally, when Michael does meet Komodo and Rampage I had no idea that one of them was a female, Rampage, as no attempt was made to even make her sound feminine. The narration was a miserable event.

I start out talking about the narration because I recently reviewed a story called the Glass Bard, and my interpretation of the story was harsh due to the narration. I did not like the story, but admitted that the narration could have been a major contributing factor, and then I saw that Ramon, from the LITRPG Podcast liked the story, and scored it much higher than I did. This means that the narration played a larger part than I anticipated. Which caused me to dissect the story more than I normally would, since I know that my interpretation was tainted by the less than stellar narration.

The writing isn’t amazing. I found large chunks of dialogue to be stilted and almost awkward. The fights were average and did not grip my imagination at all. The story itself was your standard tale of a young man who is disabled, and decides to enter the VR world Archaic Venture so that he can experience what it actually is like to walk and make friends. The odd thing is that Michael meets two players, Komodo and Rampage, and they reluctantly let him join them in a quest to kill Cerberus, a beast that will earn them $30,000 bucks, godlike in game abilities, and a visit with the game’s creator. Michael then takes them to a bar to seek info on Cerberus and ends up getting them into a battle with a higher level player because Michael just killed his horse. The fight bonds them. Huh? What? The guy is a noob that one half of the group wasn’t happy allowing to join, and he instantly gets them into a life or death battle and they become closer? I’d have booted the noob out the door once everything finished. I saw no reason for them to bond together other than the thinking that they fought together and now are pals from the experience.

One thing that bothered me was that the book takes about five minutes to start into the story itself, and another half of an hour is tacked on the end for an additional half hour for a book preview. I don’t mind previews, but I hate it when a book’s runtime is shot up longer than what it is, and honestly it feels a lot like books stuffing. Additionally, the story is only LITPRG in the barest meaning of the word. Leveling is involved, but it is never explained, but then none of the game mechanics are ever explained, and the loot tends to just be cash, exp, or jewels. Michael jumps from being a newbie to being level thirty in a very short period of time. The fact that they get a clue on how to power level is all the explanation that we ever get. We never get any stats, character information, or the ramifications for playing various races. Michael opts to play a Drow with a suspect class as well. You never see any NPCs having a bad reaction to his race or class. The story itself is basically just a go beat the monster for fabulous prizes quest. There’s not a lot about this story otherwise. Before I got this audiobook I looked at the reviews of this on audible, because I have really seeking a great LITRPG short story, and saw a lot of positive reviews, but they were very short, with not a lot to say. After listening to this I have to wonder what they were listening to. For me, this book was more of a fizzle than a sizzle.


Even though I did receive a promo code for this review it in no way influenced my considerations of the material, and in fact, inspired me to be more honest. Getting a code generally makes me harsher as a reviewer as I am more often concerned what someone like Me will decide based on my review.

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Reads fast and kicks ass, gamers... you need this

Didn't stop till the last word! Absolutely fantastic first entry of what could be my new favourite series!

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Ready to start!

A good solid story. Worth your time and money. A solid addition to the genre. I will be happy to purchase the next one as soon as it is available.

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Good read

Fantastically solid story, logically emotional character growth and characters you can root for or jeer against! Most excellent story, and a solid fit in the Litrpg genre!

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WOW

I can see where it might be going but i just felt it kind of slowed the pacing down a bit. Otherwise, a solid entry into the litrpg genre. I think this is a solid start to ap promising series

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Great read BUY this book!

Good character development, interesting story, great pace. Worth your time, buy the book!
I'll enjoy more form the Author and will buy the next in the series.

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Ready Player One, but less AND more epic

Especially if you've enjoyed books like Reafy Player One. It relies significantly less on reference and nostalgia, and stands firmly on its own as a good story.

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Definitely worth a listen

Engaging characters, interesting conflicts and a very cool world. I think that last point was the biggest draw for me, though in general it was a fun and relatively stress-free romp. The ending did fall a little flat, but I'm certainly eager for the sequel.

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Wow! Speechless!

I am glad to read this book, this was really amazing. This book contains very easy and mindset tips. This book was nicely explain things thoroughly. I was not at all disappointed with this book.

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Ready to start!

The twist of the story is definitely a surprise and you will be hook with the book from start till the end. A well written book that I highly recommend.

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  • corneliusdavid
  • 05-14-18

Awesome Book!!!

Enjoyed a fairly light hearted approach to litrpg. Decent character building. Better quality prose than most of the genre. Will read the next in the series.

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  • Ananya
  • 05-14-18

The book gave real value.

Especially now with the VR game systems. What an idea of using a sensory deprivation type tank as a way to experience the "reality" of a holographic/VR game. Come on you game and game systems creators, make this real!

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  • abram
  • 05-14-18

Grab it.

Overall, I was expecting to be like "eh, it's fine" about this book and I ended up loving it. I think I'm going to go re-listen it. Can't wait for the next one!!

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  • Dolly
  • 05-12-18

Looks great

This was an awesome book and I really like this author and her previous books as well! I cant wait for the next ones to be out as well!

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  • dustain
  • 05-12-18

Interesting info

I recomended this book to fans of Litrpg stories. Good entertaining read, will be interesting where the story goes from here. Will be looking forward to the next book in the series.

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  • tim
  • 05-12-18

Soooooo good!

I see possible future character growth and coming of power and hopefully, that's the direction the later books would go towards. Overall a very entertaining read and I am looking forward to listening the rest of the series.

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  • ZIYA
  • 05-12-18

very good

A very good listen, and I have high hopes for the second! It's only going to take more time if you keep dying.

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  • Victoria
  • 05-12-18

Awesome Book!!!

I really enjoyed this book. This author is one of my favorites as her books always leave me feeling happy and wanting the next book.

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  • joseph
  • 05-12-18

pretty awesome

I found this book a bit more difficult to get into than this author's previous works. This is likely due to the time at the beginning spent explaining certain aspects of the game. Once I got past that it was a good listen. Would recommend.

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  • rabhia
  • 05-12-18

More Please

Fist book of a seires. Loved the book. Just found out it is part one of four. Disappointed that the seires is so short. PLEASE write more books like this one