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BEEFUS

PISCATAWAY, NJ
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Author/Narrator would both benefit from education.

Overall
2 out of 5 stars
Performance
1 out of 5 stars
Story
1 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 05-13-19

Gotta love it when the narrator gives up midway and stops editing.

Author: show, don't tell. Go look up what that means. Most of these chapters were exposition, made confusing by switching verb tenses mid sentence. And what's with the page-long disclaimer on the first page? Was it because you insisted on using existing brand names like Exxon and Oculus Rift and Facebook and PlayStation4?

Narrator: Enunciate. Listen to yourself. Your character voices were interesting but you seem to get lazy and slur a lot. When you said "facts" it sounded like a homophobic slur. Also, if you're going to get all experimental with music and sound effects, don't make them so loud that we can't hear the wizard's name when he first introduces himself. Even if you are bored with the plot, go back and edit your mistakes. Don't punish the audience just because you're in a bad mood.

Buddy Cop Romp through the First Nation

Overall
5 out of 5 stars
Performance
5 out of 5 stars
Story
5 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 01-02-19

A sasquatch and a cop team up to fight identity theft, domestic violence, corruption, and supernatural horror. I didn't know I was into this kind of thing but now I want a sequel.

1 of 1 people found this review helpful

What a wild ride!

Overall
5 out of 5 stars
Performance
5 out of 5 stars
Story
5 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 09-18-18

Incredible story and voice acting and everything. You hit this one out of the park.

1 of 1 people found this review helpful

Thank you, author, for the LGBT representation.

Overall
5 out of 5 stars
Performance
5 out of 5 stars
Story
5 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 09-10-18

Great job too, narrator!

Finally a book that combines LITRPG with queer issues. I can share my favorite genre with my transgendered child. I can't say any more because of spoilers though.

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0 of 2 people found this review helpful