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Folsom, Ca
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  • Crawl Space

  • A Short Horror Story
  • By: Dona Fox
  • Narrated by: Caroline Downs
  • Length: 21 mins
  • Unabridged
  • Overall
    4 out of 5 stars 22
  • Performance
    4 out of 5 stars 22
  • Story
    4.5 out of 5 stars 21

Claustrophobic, disturbing, and creepy. A lost girl is kidnapped and held for years by a dangerous man. Her doll takes the brunt of his abuse in place of the girl. Then the man is killed in a bloody and brutal attack. Now she must protect her own child from the jealous, intrusive, and sometimes vicious toy. Who will survive when they enter the crawl space under the house?

  • 5 out of 5 stars
  • Why do I torture myself?

  • By sherry Christenson on 10-02-18

An enjoyably weird little story!

Overall
5 out of 5 stars
Performance
5 out of 5 stars
Story
5 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 08-10-18

Another odd little trip down a dark path with Dona Fox. I really enjoy this author and her offbeat short stories. She definitely has a knack for loading them with creepiness, which is often lacking in short tales like this. Simple, yet surprisingly unsettling.
I think the narrator really comes across as the disturbed character she is portraying as well.

Write some more stuff Dona!

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  • Shypoke

  • By: Dona Fox
  • Narrated by: Jack de Golia
  • Length: 18 mins
  • Unabridged
  • Overall
    4.5 out of 5 stars 17
  • Performance
    4.5 out of 5 stars 17
  • Story
    4.5 out of 5 stars 17

Frank's back on the bridge, dodging sprawling vines as thick as his secrets, crushing the dark fruit beneath his soles as he flees. He must catch the train. Her voice traps him. The child he cannot ignore. "I watched you, Uncle Frank. I saw what you did." He can hear the train's whistle. She clings to him, holding him tight as the horror approaches....

  • 5 out of 5 stars
  • This tale deals a large dose of horror

  • By mockingfinch on 06-29-18

Creepy Revenge is the best.

Overall
5 out of 5 stars
Performance
4 out of 5 stars
Story
5 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 07-30-18

I really liked this story, I love it when you can feel good about rooting for the vengeful outcome. It was a fun listen and I can't wait to see what Dona Fox does next!

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