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Developmental editor and former literary agent Mary Kole breaks down the exact process that transforms manuscripts from "just okay" to "must-read."

In this episode, you'll learn why most writers approach feedback and revision completely wrong.

You’ll discover the important difference between revision and editing.

And you’ll master the "boring edit" technique that ensures your story grips readers from page one to the end.

Mary reveals

• When to seek feedback (and when not to)
• How to create a mission statement that guides every revision decision
• Why cause-and-effect logic is the secret weapon of successful storytellers.

Whether you're drowning in feedback or paralysed by perfectionism, this episode gives you the roadmap to finish your manuscript and make it as good as you’d always hoped it would be.

What You'll Learn:

• How to filter feedback and reject notes that don't serve your story.
• The mission statement technique that guides every revision decision.
• Why big-picture changes must come before sentence-level editing.

Click here to learn more about Mary Kole

Guest Bio: Former literary agent Mary Kole provides consulting and developmental editing services to writers of all categories and genres. She founded Good Story Company in 2019 to create valuable content for writers—like the Thriving Writers Podcast, YouTube channel, and Thriving Writers classes and resources. ​​Mary has presented at hundreds of regional, national, and international writing conferences, and guest lectured at Harvard, the Ringling College of Art and Design, the Highlights Foundation, and the Loft. She also develops unique and commercial intellectual property for middle grade, young adult, and adult readers with Bittersweet Books.

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Former Scholastic editor Shelly Romero just made the leap to literary agent.

And she's spilling the industry secrets most writers never hear.

After eight years of editorial experience and now with an agent's perspective, Shelly reveals…

• What really happens when agents read your opening pages
• Why manuscripts need to be more polished than ever
• The submission mistakes that trigger instant rejections.

What You'll Learn:

• Why voice trumps plot in manuscript submissions
• Exact polish level needed for today's publishing market
• Query red flags that guarantee instant rejections

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Guest Bio: Shelly Romero began her publishing career in 2017 at Scholastic, where she rose up the ranks from editorial assistant to associate editor, where she acquired her own titles and assisted on series publishing for The Bad Guys and Goosebumps. She later joined Cake Creative as Lead Editor, and she was most recently a freelance editor. She graduated from Stephens College with a bachelor’s degree in English and attended the 2017 NYU Summer Publishing Institute. Shelly was selected as a 2020 Publishers Weekly Star Watch Honoree and is a member of Latinx in Publishing & People of Color in Publishing. Born and raised in Miami by Honduran parents, she now resides in New York City, where she might be found at a movie theatre viewing the latest release from her Letterboxd watchlist.

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Every thriller, mystery, suspense, and crime writer faces the same dilemma…

How do you craft a story that keeps readers turning pages?

In this episode, Julie Tyler Ruiz reveals a simple framework that separates forgettable genre fiction from the stories readers obsess over for years.

You'll discover…

• How to identify the one central question that must drive your entire manuscript
• Learn the specific prompts that will transform vague plot ideas into page-turning gold
• Master the art of creating payoffs that leave readers breathless.

Whether you're stuck in the middle of a manuscript or planning your next story, this conversation will give you the confidence to craft questions worth answering.

And (most importantly) answers that readers will never forget.

What You'll Learn:

• How to transform questions into page-turning hooks
• Why character stakes must connect to your main question
• How to build toward answers that create lasting impact

Click here to learn more about Julie Tyler Ruiz

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Guest Bio: Julie Tyler Ruiz, PhD, is a writer, educator, and creator of StoryBold. With a decade of experience in higher education and a PhD in English, she combines business savvy with a deep passion for storytelling to help writers craft their best work. Through self-study courses, group masterminds, in-depth articles, and private coaching, Julie empowers writers to unlock their authentic voice and bring their stories to life. Now a sought-after voice in the writing world, she’s dedicated to guiding storytellers toward clarity, confidence, and creative success.

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