Ole Steel Bridge (Lovers Lane)

The most common story that tells everyone that a young couple was spending time underneath the bridge one night and when they were fixing to leave, they got attacked by a dark mysterious person. The couple was stabbed multiple times with the young lady passing away instantly. The young man survived the attack long enough to climb into the back seat of a car traveling on the bridge. He was rushed to the hospital where he later passed away. According to the story, the police spent more than a year looking for any evidence and couldn't. So the police closed the case and it's now marked as unsolved. There has been over 180 different cases of Paranormal Activity on the bridge, but unfortunately the bridge has been tore down and was replaced with new concrete one.

Has some potential but not quite there…

This is certainly a worthwhile attempt and something I would be very interested in with some changes. The stories are interesting but could be fleshed out a bit with more details. While, straightforward as they are, there isn’t enough information there to make the listener feel as invested in the story and characters as they could be. I would add more descriptive elements and/or background information on the characters of the stories.
It might be nice to know a little about the Narrator/Author as well.
With regard to the Narrator, this needs a little work, too. Telling a good story is really hard to do for most people. For a medium such as this, I would say that the narrator needs to double down on rehearsing the content. It shouldn’t sound like it’s being read aloud. It should sound like someone is telling us a story. I think that can probably only come with lots and lots of practice. Check your words and spelling. Make sure you’re saying each word correctly and practice until the story flows smoothly, has correct pronunciation, and has no awkward pauses.
It’s a good start!