Episode 37: Dialogue vs. Narration: Finding the Perfect Balance in Your Story

Struggling to decide when to use dialogue and when to rely on narration in your writing? In this episode, I break down dialogue vs. narration and how each tool shapes pacing, character development, and reader engagement. Learn when dialogue brings scenes to life through authentic voices and emotional exchanges—and when strong narration provides clarity, depth, and momentum.

I’ll explore common mistakes writers make, such as overloading scenes with exposition or relying too heavily on dialogue without context. You’ll also discover practical tips for balancing show vs. tell, improving character voice, and using narration to enhance your scenes. Whether you’re writing a novel, short story, or screenplay, understanding the strengths of dialogue and narration will help you craft more compelling, immersive stories.

Perfect for fiction writers at any stage, this episode offers actionable writing advice you can apply immediately to your draft. If you want sharper dialogue, smoother narration, and scenes that truly resonate with readers, this conversation is for you.

Helpful links (some are affiliate links):

Scrivener (the writing software I use)

AlbaArango.com (my website and contact information)

The Ruby Diamond (my newest release!)

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