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Are you over-describing your scenes? How much description is too much in fiction?

In this episode, we talk about one of the most common writing struggles: overwriting description. Many writers fear the reader won’t “see” the story unless every detail is spelled out. But too much description can slow your pacing, stall the plot, and tempt readers to skim.

We’ll explore the difference between immersive detail and infodumping, practical ways to tighten your prose, and how to weave description naturally into action.

If you want stronger pacing, sharper scenes, and more powerful storytelling, this episode will help you learn when to cut and when to let the reader’s imagination do the work.

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Sprint Prompt: Theme: Enough is Enough

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What makes a story unforgettable? It’s not just the plot, it’s the experience!

In this episode, we explore how sensory writing brings fiction to life, helping readers feel the story instead of simply watching it unfold. Join us as we discuss practical ways to use the five senses to deepen emotional connection, reveal character, and create immersive scenes, all without overwhelming your reader.

We’ll cover common pitfalls, share revision strategies you can apply immediately, and talk about how faith and discernment guide us in writing vivid yet purposeful descriptions that reflect the beauty of God’s creation.

Whether you’re drafting or revising, this episode will equip you to craft stories readers don’t just read… but truly experience.

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30 Days of Writing Sprint Prompts:
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Jamie: https://writingshorts.net/+
Jenifer: https://jenifercarlltong.com/
Tina: https://christinacattane.com/

Sprint Prompt: era, restaurant, laboratory, bare, freshman

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According to Jen, a simile is like a cup of tea made from pre-used grounds. Metaphors, meanwhile, crush it in the comparison competition. Jamie says, “not all metaphors are similes, but all similes are metaphors. Or something.” Confused? You won’t be, after this episode of The Christian Indie Writers’ Podcast.

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30 Days of Writing Sprint Prompts:
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Visit our website:
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Learn more about the hosts…
Jamie: https://writingshorts.net/
Jenifer: https://jenifercarlltong.com/
Tina: https://christinacattane.com/

Sprint Prompt
Spend the entire sprint crafting one extended metaphor.