Chapter 1

Chapter 1 of his curvy obsession. Nathaniel was left by his fiancé on his wedding day. And he needed a replacement.

Awful

This is absolutely awful; both narrators sound like they are reading instead of acting the part. The letter read was so ridiculous that it was not believable; using a debit to take millions of dollars out of bank account, please! Going through with a marriage anyway to a complete stranger after being humiliated and used? The male narrator read quickly as if he was nervous; had to slow it down a few notches. Total waste of time. Scratch this disaster or completely revise storyline to make it more believable, too far-fetched!