The Mountain Man's Kitten

For three years I hid in the shadows watching her. Which is no easy task when I have to duck to get through doorways and Dwayne Johnson would need to bulk up to give me a run for my money. I’d could take on a tank and have it turning tail and calling for mama. Me, Miller ‘The Grip’ Graham, is terrified of one thing and her name is Katarina - my kitten - Harcourt. She’s my everything with sapphire eyes, slow voluptuous curves and a smile that would make the devil reform. Trouble is, around her, I can't seem to get a word out. But today is my day. I’ve just won the log toss at the local Lumberjack Jamboree and I’m riding high. I see her, my dick is hard and it’s go time. The minute I gather my courage, stomp over to claim what is mine, she hands me something that nearly tears my world apart. I thought I was here to save her, turns out I'm the one that needs saving. Author’s Note: This mountain man has met his match. When the object of his obsession hands him a tiny bundle of furry fury, he’s in way over his head. He needed her before, but who knew a tiny kitten could bring this hulk to his knees. She’s taming the tiny beast and melting the heart of another. A happily ever after from the top of the mountain—where they can both see forever. I’m so excited to announce that I’ve teamed up with Jordan Marie, Mila Crawford, Aria Cole, Dani Wyatt, Frankie Love, Tory Baker, and L. Nicole to bring you THICKWOOD, CO. In Thickwood the men work hard but love harder. This series is all about possessive, alpha, and over-the-top mountain men who will stop at nothing to claim their women.

narration needs work

having a man's voice for the chapter with her pov was bad. The man's voice was choppy and didn't have an even tone or much inflection during spicy scenes. kinda bummed me out. This is an awesome story tho, so please rework it a little.