The Jake Matthews Saga

Ascension

De: Josiah Akhtab

Narrado por: Virtual Voice

Jake Matthews is bored out of his mind. A blind, teenage boy with no purpose, no motivation, and relative peace and quiet surrounding him.

One night, Jake is dragged away to another dimension to a planet known as Figueroa. On this planet, he meets The White Figure General, X-Otropolis, who tells Jake he’s been chosen to stop The Great Figueroan War and defeat The Black Figure.

Jake finds himself learning swordplay and developing his might to save a planet that is more connected to Earth than he thinks as The Great Figueroan War spreads across dimensions, where Jake not only has to save two worlds, but enlist help from unlikely allies including Thalia, the girl he thought was lost to him forever.

Not as well written as Immortal

I gave up with about 6 hours left. Blind kid who can describe everything in detail down to how many inches someone is tall or how much they weigh exactly. Most of the time it will say they were so many feet and so many inches meters tall. And with every single character it is the exact same wording, height and weight. Needs better descriptors. Honestly this reads like one of my 6th grade students wrote it. Very much I’m so cool, I don’t care what anyone thinks, and I’m going to tell everyone in the same exact words over and over, It sounds childish without being an elementary school reading level book. This needs a lot of work and probably a good editor.